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Azurena (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

Oh my goodness! I love this! It's so cute and adorable and . . . I just love it! Oh please let there be more soon! If you want I'll review every single chapter from here on out if it'll inspire you! Lol

*loves* Please update soon!


Alexandra (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

Awesome chapter! I've been waiting for you to update! I'm so glad you did. It made my day. Kagome and Sesshoumaru are so cute in this story! Now that Sesshoumaru has found out she is a miko I wonder what he's gonna do now. Update soon.


TruGemini (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

Actually, the flow of this is really good. You can continue with chapters where they learn more and more about each other and at least become good friends before adding any drama and stuff like that. You have a pretty strong base here, so keep it up.


Nilee1 (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

great, great story!!!!!


KEdakumi (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

I just love this story.  Reread it from the start.  Can't wait to see where the plot bunnies take you.  And really can't wait to see what happens when Inuyasha finds out. <insert evil grin here>  Maybe Kagura, the evil-stalkerish-one-night-stand could walk in for a good zap. :)  Please update soon!


amy (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

Lovely,more updates


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

i just found this fic and i LOVES it! this is so very interesting!


Kaiyai (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

I love this!  It's so cute!


sysclp (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 May 2011

You may want to edit a bit for continuity as you have a slight confusion in here.  Early in the chapter you mention he is sitting in his office keeping tabs on the aura of his miko, but then at the end you make it sound like he only then figures out she is a miko.  Just wanted to let you know so you can fix the slip.  Thanks!


kamille (Chapter 4) - Mon 09 May 2011

YAY!!! it was soooo good!!!! keep it up!!! and bring in the romance!!!!  lol XD


Kami (Chapter 3) - Tue 26 Apr 2011

Keep writing Im really enjoying it!!!


jojo661538 (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

I really love your story its great work keep up the great work your doing with this story i hope to read more soon ^_^


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

I am beginning to really enjoying this story. It totally captures your imagination and won't let you go. i am very excited to be able to read your next update. Please hurry.


sara (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

I like this story and I´m glad, that you made Kagome a real adult. Many authors tend to make her older in age but they portray her like she is still fifteen, they make her act like a teenager and I hate that. The marriage is not so unbelievable at least not so much in Japan. Honour is really important for Japanese and not only for the males. The girl has to be cautious also so she doesn´t bring shame to her family and this is a better solution as to being the bride who had been stood up by a honourless male.The big loser in this game is Inuyasha, nothing will excuse his actions. Arranged marriages are not so uncommon as it seems.

It was already really mature of Kagome in trying to marry him although she knew that he wasn´t really loyal to her but she got lucky with Sesshoumaru. I can´t imagine him acting as foolish as his brother even if there is no love.

But that´s what this makes it fun, to get to know each other so they have a chance to develop real feelings. I always saw Kagome as a responsible girl and she did what she had to do and Sesshoumaru got lucky. So don´t worry, it´s believable and the characters are IC in such a situation. This is not feudal Japan after all so Sesshoumaru acts like himself but is in a different time with modified behaviour.

I have only one request, please don´t bring Rin into this story as an adopted daughter of him. This concept is so overused it´s not even funny anymore. He is a businessman and seems to be devoted to his work. Bringing in an adoption just wouldn´t fit in here. Kagome and Sesshoumaru are intelligent beings and I think it´s not necessary to bring in a kid to make them connect as she would be forced to watch a human girl that Sesshoumaru had to adopt through mysterious reasons. Please, just don´t.  


fb (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

like like update soon <3


Paige (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Thank you for updating! I'm liking this story! :D

Cannot wait to read more!


hopuchan (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

i have to admit that i was wary about sess randoming marrying kags like that; but it actually wasn't too unbelieveable afterall. i'm really enjoying this story so far and look forward to more chapters. i don't think the characters are OOC at all. i'm really loving the hesitant and charming interactions between sess and kags as they get to know each other. 

 

More please!! ;)

 

 


cyin (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

very fresh idea! ~love it! please update soon!


amy (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Wonderful, more updates pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!


Loveyaa (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

It seems like so far so good. I wonder what you will do to create some conflict (like marrying someone you literally just meet doesn't create enough conflict) cuz there is always conflict. I think you have done a stupendous job so far and I can't wait to see where things go from here when they have to return to the real world and adjust :)


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