waa?! i cant believe she just spilled the beans like that! oh Rin... :P
And, he;s essentially kidnapped Kagome.. I wonder how shes gonna like that one... haha :)
KEEP IT UP, THIS IS A NEW CONCEPT, I LOVE IT, KEEP GOING!
its got a good start! you're description in the beginning was especially good (i love morning sunshine filtering though the windows ^^) *waits for chapter two*