I just can't wait to read more of this story its exciting!! great job :-) thanks for wrighting
I think this is a very interesting idea for a story, and I've never even SEEN "Die Hard". I like the way you portray your characters, especially InuYasha- I could picture him perfectly in the role you assigned to him. Even though you only barely introduced Kagome, InuYasha's outlook earlier in the chapter gives us a pretty good idea why she left him, and why she feels the need to build a career for herself. That was skillful writing in action. I'm curious about Sango- Miroku jokingly denied being responsible for her pregnant condition. Wonder who is the baby's daddy?
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