| Very interesting. I really like where you're going with this. Definitely keeping my eye on this one. ^^
       
katlady (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Aug 2009 
| this  is really good i like were your  going with this update soon
       
| i think i want you to update now, this is a really interesting start, though.. betrothed? O_o
       
| I like this so far...... The story line (at this point) seems to be well thought out, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. :)
       
| Hey great job on the chapter I love this story.  I can not wait until you tell us the mystery lol.
       
ygrayne (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Jan 2009 
so far so good 
please do not leave a cliff hanger it is terrible annoying\ please update soon please 
      
| Pretty good start. you've suckered me in. Please update soon:)
       
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