Raynell (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I enjoyed the story. I've always had the sneaking suspicion that Sesshomaru was fascinated by and attracted to Kagome from the start -- he's always noticed her -- so this tale fits right in with my head canon.

There were some grammatical mistakes and wrong word usage, but nothing too horrible, in my opinion, to take people out of the story. So, keep up with the good work.


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