Whoa, now that was unexpected .... How will Sessh get his girl?
I love this story! Love it!
To write something in medias re is incredibly difficult; but you seem to do it with ease. You keep the past well connected to the present, spreading little breadcrumbs that make me go, "WHOA! So that's why..."
The characters are believable- My heart hurts (literally) every time poor Sesshomaru refuses to just deal with his problem, great example of heroic hubris!! Inuyasha, Miroku and Bank playing the overly protective big brother figures is spot on. They always act out their parts in a believable way.
Sorry, I'm gushing.
NICE WORK!
Hooo, Horny Sessh ..... yum yum
Yaaay, kickass Kagome XD
This looks promising, and I rather like the devotion the guys show Kags, she is more than deserving of something like that. Can't wait to clck onto ch no 2 :D
~lily
How CUTE!!!!!!!! Butterflies, I want butterflies for my birthday. Its been forever since you've posted, i'm glad to finally get to read a chapter. I hope all is well.
Chaos
Oh MY GOD!!!
First I have to say thank you for this chapter, the long wait was so worth it.
Two: I love the butterfly gift Sesshoumaru gave her. I have to wonder how you came up with that?
Sneaky Sesshoumaru and she has yet to figure out he knows here better than anyone..
Simply Beautiful chapter. I cant wait for the next one.
As for you I hope your c-section goes well and that both you and your new baby are healthy and happy. I wish you and your family the best with all the changes coming.
Sending all my love to you and yours
Sunset Love
Elle (Chapter 46) - Fri 29 Jul 2011
I was so happy to see that you updated this--I swear I've been waiting for a lifetime for this new chapter to come through! And to top it all off, you even updated it on my birthday... :)
I'm loving your story but I can't wait to read more...
I hope you'll continue to update your fic, but take your time~
Alpine (Chapter 46) - Fri 29 Jul 2011
Just beautiful. This was a spectacular chapter. The interaction between our love birds was great. I want to offer my congrats on your new bundle of joy. Good luck hon!
Glad to see the chapter and will wait for a new one when you find time. Infants are so much fun and the very beginning is such a wonderful blessing.
Hugs
Alpine ^_^
Zalika (Chapter 46) - Fri 29 Jul 2011
Yes, yes, yes!!!!! I love this story, and seeing it on Dokuga is awesome. I love this site for fanfiction, and I love this story. I can't wait for the next one. The next chapter I believe is in precent time and I so want to see what happens next. I'm sure it wont be for a while, but I have no doubt it would be worth the wait.
This story was an amazing read. I'm so glad I gave it a chance. I admit the beginning made me quite skeptical, her being all over Inuyasha, Miroku, Bankotsu and Shippo. But the more you got into their friendships, the more acceptable it seemed and you're portrayal of her & Sesshomaru's relationship built up into something beautiful that I don't believe anyone has done in a SK fanfiction ever, at lest none that I have ever read.
I hope to gosh that this story is not over yet. I would like to read more and it doesn't feel very concluded, does it? They still have to mate, eh? & that should be an oh so fun chapter to read if you are kind enough to make the effort. A+, my friend and I await impatiently for an update. :}
MEA <3
Zeika (Chapter 45) - Thu 26 May 2011
Absolutely wonderful story, thanks for sharing it. Can't wait to see where it will end up!
Nikki (Chapter 45) - Mon 02 May 2011
I love this story I started to read it on ff.net and then continued to follow it here so pleaseeee update again soon the wait is killing me ^_^
Tana (Chapter 45) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
Love this story! You've done an excellent job with the characters, building them up and demonstrating their relationships with one another. I love how you go back and forth between present and past, giving insight into how the characters have gotten to this point. I can't help but feel bad for Sesshoumaru, his mom was so bitter, but it explains why he acts the way he does. YAY for Kagome giving Sesshoumaru a chance. I'm so glad he finally found out about his mom, hopefully he, Katsuro, Izayoi, and Inu can begin to patch things up now and start down the path towards being a real family once again. Oh, and I love that he's a virgin!! It's so common that authors have had him sleep with innumberable women while Kagome is literally untouched, so it's refreshing to have them both be virgins. Thanks for writing such a great story, I look forward to reading what you have in store for Kags and Sesshy.
thank goodness the truth abou what really happened between sesshomaru, his mother, and katsuro finally comes to light. and im glad sesshomaru finally sat down and listened to the truth that his father spoke, its about time. but this chapter was so good i cant wait til the next 2 chapters.
Alpine (Chapter 45) - Mon 17 Jan 2011
So super excited to see a new chapter... It was great. It's nice that he listened to his Father about the situation with his Mother and now has a bit more understanding of what he's actually been doing to the people around him. I am hoping that he starts to make amends with them soon too.
Kagome seems to really be also understanding her feelings for him and how mutual the attraction is starting to look to them both. I can't wait to see more.
Thanks for the great story and the update!!! Hugs Alpine ^_^
lara (Chapter 29) - Sat 15 Jan 2011
I love this story .I started reading it & read like over 30 caps then I had a panic attack & stopped .Now I finally dug up the nerve to continue & I'm once again a very happy camper & very excited to see where this leads. I want them together so bad. This last chap with them singing the song about Kagome having a big white dog left me laughing my ass off.
I can't wait to see where it goes next
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