So you ever planning on updating this? 'Cause I've been eager to know what happens next for years! Update please and thank you!

o_O I can't believe it took me this long to read this! I LOVE IT REE!! More? PLease? I wanna know what happens you got me all curious now.

hey hey great story! great idea! are you going to continue part III and IV?

I hope there is going to be more. Will there be more? 

Yup, you're absolutely right, the bloodstream and all connected organs being the 'inside', the "entrails" being the "outside", and not only for occidental medicine, but for chinese traditionnal medicine too ;)

this story is fascinating. I hope it ends well, I'm a sucker for happy endings... but, oh well, I like everything you write, whether it ends well or not...

Thanks for the ride! Good job!

Dewa mata

Oh, I like this.  It is touching and well-written.  I hope you can update soon!

Very nice chapter :) I am glad they are now mated, this is an awesome story, but it is also so sad :( Keep up the great work!! :D

mou! i really hope that Tsubaki gets caught so that Sesshomaru can kill her! b/c i looked back and didnt see that She was killed or caught. just that Kagome woke up and she was above her!

Like it & am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. The only error I really saw is reigns instead of reins, reign is like the king reigned over kis kingdom for 20 years & reins are a bridle part.

Amazing! I could totally feel some emotions while reading.... Great job!! Hope to read more from this story and you!!!

Very intense! Great writing :)

Oh how I wish this was going to be happy ending. alas, it is not so. But I love this non-the-less, I know I'll want to read this again and again!! Such a bittersweet story.

This is a beautifully sad story....but i cant help but feel enraptured by it. 

*squeals* This story is off to a great start, I love the concept. It is very well written and descriptive! Sad tho :( But I am loving it! You have got me hooked so you must update soon!!! :D Keep up the super work!

This story is interesting and different. I really loved the ending to this chapter. i also like that 4 parts will keep the story from being to drawn out. cant wait for the next part.

I like it so far! You don't have this story listed as a tragedy so I am hoping there is a happy ending~ Can't wait to read more.

That was an interesting and promising beginning.  You are an excellent writer!  I can't wait for chapter two...

This a bittersweet story. It's so sad. -cries-, but beautiful.