I really enjoyed this, eloquent and a hint chilling.

>_> though I have a hard time picturing Jaken being so smoothly poetic XD

I think this is the perfect example of mastering the english language. You have a creative use of dialogue which generates an enjoyable flow and ease of reading. I enjoyed this so much that I added it to my faves list! Also love the idea of making a story of a poem - very Poe of you! :)

This had a very Edgar Alan Poe feel about it, and I absolutely loved it. This was another great story from you Hairann, Well Done!!

Very nice.  I really liked this a lot.  It was very inventive and new.  I wish I were as creative.  This flowed nicely and I loved Jaken's telling of the tale.  I felt like I was back in one of Edgar Alan Poe's books.  Great job.

-eyes glues to the computer screen-

I really like this, and I love your style of writing! This was one of my favorite lines ---> “I'm sorry my mate, she can not be found, But it is to this manor she is bound. Leave here we shall and you'll be free, Of her haunting memory.”

Please keep up the good work, I like reading your stuff!