"Kagome felt pleasure skitter down her spine to the tips of her toes."
I love this phrase. Your use of the word "skitter" is just so effective. With just that one simple word I can see Kagome's pleasure literally dance along her spine, soft little random touches like some pretty little Junebug bustling about. You weave magic for me, you truly do.
Kanna37 (Chapter 21) - Tue 14 Dec 2010
you know, that is so funny. My kids are one of the few out there that can say that I don't argue with their 'modern music' - I listen to most of the same stuff, lol. I've very eclectic tastes in music, I guess. The kids certainly have inherited that,thugh - they know all the best 80's music from me, while I know the best modern stuff from them!
Amber
Kanna37 (Chapter 20) - Mon 13 Dec 2010
Oh god - that one was SO NOT FAIR! ~whimpers~
Amber
Caught in the act was wonderfully cute!
I had not read any of these one shots. Read all of them today! Good collection! I enjoyed! Especially enjoyed that Kagome accepts that Sesshomaru is as he is... And really appreciate that you don't change him to fit her!
Kanna37 (Chapter 19) - Mon 13 Dec 2010
Ugh... math. Figures Sesshoumaru would be good at it.
Amber
"With surprising gentleness, the daiyoukai tilted her chin with one clawed finger and pressed his lips to hers in a deep, lingering kiss.'
A perfect ending. Christmas, Sesshoumaru and mistletoe. Happy sigh. Thankyou.
Utterly beautiful. You never ever fail to delight. I read this and just sighed. You gave me a few moments here where I just sat and dreamed. Thankyou so very much.
“It’s beautiful and quiet, and no matter how cold it looks, there is warmth and life beneath the ice, if you know where to find it…”
That beautiful line you wrote is just breathtakingly beautiful.
The humour of the story is very amusing but that line takes my breath away. Thankyou so much. Your imagination is a wonderful place!
I enjoyed this so much. It was very subtle the way you showed Kagome's irritation growing and growing with the windy day. So by the time she is speaking with Sesshoumaru she is too flustered to grasp his meaning until the wind flips up her skirt. I love how you finish with that perfect punchline of his sly golden eyes taking in that delightful sight. I really liked this. Thank you.
I read all 17 drabbles and my favorites are: Sesshoumaru putting Kouga in his place (priceless), Shippou and the Mistletoe (crafty little devil) and the letter.
They were all really cute, but those stood out the most.
Tsuki (Chapter 17) - Sat 11 Dec 2010
Haha I loved it :p
Tsuki (Chapter 16) - Sat 11 Dec 2010
So sweet :)
Anonymous (Chapter 17) - Sat 11 Dec 2010
Snort, snort, cough, laugh... oh, bad Sesshoumaru. Gotta love the sexy pervert, though!
Amber
Ooooooooh! XD What a lovely little chapter. And the poem was beautiful. Very well done. You chose your words perfectly. Keep up the good work.
sousie (Chapter 16) - Wed 17 Nov 2010
go sesshomaru
Kanna37 (Chapter 16) - Sat 13 Nov 2010
Oh, I really liked this last one. Beautiful!
Amber
Kanna37 (Chapter 15) - Thu 07 Oct 2010
AHAHAHA! I loved that last one... "You win!" "I always do." I can just imagine the smug expression... lovely!
Amber
Hahah, that was fantastic ^_^
"“If it pisses you off that much, why don’t you get down off your high horse and come do something about it?”
I can just picture the look on her face when she said that, hehe. Loved this chapter. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work!
Haha this is my favorite chapter so far ^_^
“You mean cuz it’s cold and frigid, and when it comes around everything dies?”
Best line ever. Totally cracked me up. There were a lot of good lines in tis chapter. "Silly puppy-man." comes to mind, lol. It was very well written. Keep up the good work!
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