| I am so glad that you transferred your story. I have followed this for a long time and love it very much.
I look forward to your next update. Til next time, Deb.
Little Yoyo (Chapter 74) - Fri 08 Aug 2008
| yay good thing you transfered your story here from ASS i really liked that website too bad it had to close but i like your story too so good thing you transfered i'm looking forward to continuing reading this one and "Whose Child Is This?"
Cace (Chapter 74) - Wed 30 Jul 2008
| I absolutely love this story! Keep up the good work!
| Tis is soooooo good i love it i hope you write more soo i love it
EJK (Chapter 74) - Mon 07 Jul 2008
| WooHoo! You're writing this story again! i started reading it when you first started it and loved it, but lost hope you would ever update it.
| awesome story, i really like all the detail you've put into it, and all the POV switches are good, i like to know what everybody's thinking **^_^** i hope u update soon
froggi (Chapter 74) - Wed 11 Jun 2008
| I love this story! I hope you keep updating!
meiskah (Chapter 74) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
| I absolutely love this story. I really enjoy going through the different points of view. Hope you update soon.
wawa (Chapter 74) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
| I love your story! I was really happy to see it on this site. I can not wait until Kagome starts fighting the stupid girls and shows them all who is stronger!!!
| Yay! Finally new stuff! Please update soon? Though the changing use of the first person singular and the third person singular while staying in the same pov irritates me a bit. Could I beta the old chapters for you?
lara (Chapter 67) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
| wow, this is a very interesting story..great plot, and very vividly described. the only thing i would say is you switch from 1st person 'I' to 3rd 'He/she' within chapters. keep it one or the other.
| I think you made a mistake uploading chapter 5 and 6. They're identical.
Alyssa (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Jun 2008
| Are you going to be posting more chapters after you have updated it on this site?
(Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Jun 2008
| Yes
| YAY!! IT'S BACK!! IT'S BACK!! IT'S BACK!! *does a little jig*...sorry...i fell in love with this story on a single spark...
| This chapter "Site seeing and a little reevaluation" is the exact same as the previous one. And there seems to be a jump in time from this chapter to the next one as if there is something the reader is missing.
| I love this story, please update soon, it is a great story,thank you for such great work.
| y7ou have a mistake. you have chap. 13 posted twice.
| There are a lot of capitalization mistakes here. I see a ton of "i went to..." or "my mom and i..." instead of "I went to..." and "My mom and I..." There are also a bit of punctuation, like for example: "Starting to panic slightly, I jogged to catch up with Sesshoumaru."
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