i kinda afraid reading new updates... sometime kags will die... it's sad.. but i love your fanfic.. so i can't help for wanting more... great job
AWwh! I dont think it diluted it at all, it was a sweet and gentle chapter that really expressed the love that Rin has for Kagome and the tenderness and caring attitude that Sesshoumaru is feeling for her. :) I loved it!
Rose (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Feb 2011
I love the story! Please continue and keep up the good work!
Cherry (Chapter 16) - Mon 07 Feb 2011
Excellent story. And I wait.....
I am in love with this story.
You're right. Although it is short, it covered a lot of necessary material. It was a good transitional chapter. I thought you wrote Sango well in this chapter. I htink she would have reacted just that way. I have a feeling they will be following Kagome and Sesshoumaru shortly. It's nice to have everything out on the table. I guess now it's just a matter of time. I still think the love Sesshoumaru feels for Kagome might have been a little rushed, but it works for the story so I can't complain ;) Thank you for the update, keep up the good work!
Nyuka (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Feb 2011
You want a review...so I'm reviewing...XD....T-T It really is sad that Kagome is dieing, and what Miroku said about things working out in the end for good people.... I have always felt that was true as well which it why I believe you will find a way to save Kagome. I really don't like stories like this, which makes me wander if I have some morbid fasination with death, I find it beautifuly trajic it makes me cry but its just so beautiful in its own way.....I guess this is what I'm sensing from your story now......Keep up the good work...Nyuka
short but awesome!!! LOL I loved seeing Sesshomaru's possesive/protective side come out!! Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more. :)
It may have been short, but it was full and informative. It was a wonderful little gateway to the next chapter. XD
Mimiru (Chapter 16) - Thu 03 Feb 2011
EEE! Update! and...oh...you dedicated it to me <:3 you didnt have to thank you.
This chapter, despite the shortness, was still as beautiful as I remember it to be, so dont worry about it!
Awww.... Kag's will have a happy ending, right? Awww.... Demon puppy goes guard dog. :P
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Rose (Chapter 15) - Thu 03 Feb 2011
That was so cliffy! I love it! Please update soon!
anon (Chapter 13) - Tue 01 Feb 2011
I am so sorry but Inuyasha is OOC. Even if he would betray Kagome he would never try to kill her like this. And why was he so shocked that she's dieing? No laughing matter? He just wanted to kill her in a most painful way.
anon (Chapter 2) - Tue 01 Feb 2011
If you watched the Final Act you should know that Kikyo is not the heartless evil bitch authors like to make her.
Otherwise interesting story. I dont think I ever read one where Kags was mortally sick.
Nyuka (Chapter 15) - Tue 01 Feb 2011
I almost cried ... but its so beautifully tragic at the same time thank you for the updates, I like how Inuyasha turned against Kikyo it's probably his only redeeming quality at the moment.....I love your story.....Nyuka
Magnificent.
Lady P (Chapter 15) - Mon 31 Jan 2011
Very well done again! Loving your writing please update asap!!! :3 Loving the way your portraying everyone in the story so far please continue your wonderful writing!
Oy @_@ Poor Kagome is going through the wringer. I'm really curious to see what you're going to do with Inuyasha. Unles he was under some kind of mind control, what he did was absolutely unforgivable. You're really keeping us on our toes. I keep thinking "Ok, so this is going to be when she dies..." and then I'm always wrong, lol. I liked the part in this story where Sesshoumaru smells his own fear. It made a strong impact and I don't think I've ever seen someone use that before. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to seeing what happens next. Keep up the good work!
Rose (Chapter 14) - Sat 29 Jan 2011
Awsome! What happens next? Please update soon!
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