Aww a cliffy. I really enjoyed this chapter Freya! Can't wait to see what how Myoga responses to Kagomes answers.. Awesome story and hope you update soon! :)
Actually I kind of like Naraku (yes I know you've written it differently, still...), but Lyka is not my fave character, most likely because she's "mean" to Kagome.
Anyway, I'm glad that you'll be focusing more on this fic, an update is something I always look forward to! Best of Luck! (for both writing and RL)
I was so sure you were going to use Jaken. But I believe Myoga was a much better choice. Jaken wouldn't have worked so well. Can't wait for more.
Yay! another awesome chappie!
am so glad you are gonna work on finishing this one first! :D :D :D
Alpine (Chapter 18) - Wed 05 Jan 2011
I swear... I have never left this many reviews in... like ever actually.. I was so pleased to already see an update.. its like magic.. ha ha ha
Thanks for the update, look forward to seeing how the old man reacts and tries to help Hugs Alpine ^_^
Ahh, so Myoga can "see" as well. I can see this is going to be very good. I wonder what Myoga will be able to tell our little Kagome?
and for your third review in a row that last one wasn't for you. Your story was awesome. There were no misspellings I detected. Have a lovely day :p
okay I'm sure it's a lovely story but in your summary you've misspelled soulmate and you repeated the bit about Sesshoumaru and Miroku being assigned to make the two girls fall in love with them. First impressions and all that. The summary sounds promising and I wish you the best of luck!
Yay update! Interesting way to pull Lyka back in. I'm not a fan of her, but I do look forward to seeing what she's been up to. The chapter was spell binding as always. If it were a book I'd have had trouble putting it down :)
LunaGirl (Chapter 18) - Wed 05 Jan 2011
An update! And what an update! I love the outfit that Kagome is wearing! And Sesshomaru sure sounds hot! I was expecting perhaps old Totosai, but I am glad it is Myoga!
This keeps getting better and better! Thank you for updating and Happy New Year!
Alpine (Chapter 17) - Wed 05 Jan 2011
I am not sure how I ran across this fic but man... I am just dumbfounded by how spectacular it is.. I really have enjoyed how it is moving along and the character dynamic with Sess, Kagome and Naraku. Can't wait to read your other fics and to see new chapters on this one. Great Job!!!
Hugs Alpine ^_^
Reijiko (Chapter 17) - Fri 31 Dec 2010
I positively love your fan fics. you are an elogant and ingaging author and i would be wayyy interested in reading your original fiction!
Anna (Chapter 17) - Fri 31 Dec 2010
This fic is fantastic, but I swear, these dramatic endings (dare I call them cliff-hangers) make me hate you, while at the same time I am loving you for blessing us with another amazing chapter.
I just love this story. The first paragraph was what did me in, and I've been hooked ever since. :) You are a great writer!! Keep up the good work! There are not many out there like you. You are a gem among rocks. Please update as soon as you can!! :)
Amanda (Chapter 17) - Thu 30 Dec 2010
Oh cool I can review w/o an acct. You're te first person I've bothered trying it w/ ^_^
Anywho, I absolutely love and adore your writing. You've got a wonderfu style and an absolutely amazing imagination. When I see any of your stories, I have to read automatically. Like, can't resist. Your smut makes me super happy, no lies. Anywho, just wanted to say that love you and your stories and hope you keep writing all of them for a long long time ^_^
Drama! yeah! hehe, Lyka is one crazy dead bitch. I wonder how Naraku is reacting to that news and if he'll try anything when they meet up on Sunday. Yet no one knows but you yet so i'll just sit back and wait peacefully.
Rachelle (Chapter 16) - Wed 29 Dec 2010
i love this story i can not wait to here more. this is the most interesting and mind capturing story. amazing your doing a great job i love it :))
dayna (Chapter 16) - Sun 26 Dec 2010
Great, great story so far. Hmmmm that little fantasy of Sessy and Na Ra Ku hahaha yes all I can say is wow wow wow wow wow. HOT!!!! lol well cant wait to see what is gonna happen next since they are finally home. Should be very interesting.
oh my. Quite the lemon. I've been wondering how you'll work things out between the two of them. I must say, I'm impressed you managed to fit in plot development and some sexy time. Happy holidays indeed!
joyouki (Chapter 16) - Mon 20 Dec 2010
ABSOLUTE JUICE!!! I HAVE COME ACROSS YOUR OTHER STORIES AND I HAVE NOT BEEN ABLE TO LEAVE FEEDBACK SINCE I WAS READING ON MY CELL PHONE AND IT WOULDNT ALLOW ME TOO...ANY WAY YOU HAVE A NEW CAPTIVATED FAN!!
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