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AmaViarra (Chapter 17) - Sat 08 Jan 2011

Yay~ an update!!

 

I loved it, well written and very sweet. It's good that the story and the character's lives are starting to turn around for the better. Good job, I'm anxious for the next chapter and what will happen!!


Cassie (Chapter 16) - Wed 29 Dec 2010

Hey love your story glad that Kagura is gonna get hers. And I'm glad that Sesshomaru knows what Kagura did to Rin and that he knows that Rin is his and Kagomes. And I'm also glad that Sesshomaru has founf Kagome and he's gonna nurse her back to health. So keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter and if its not a problem please make the chapters alittle longer....... Thanks ^____^


Izzy (Chapter 16) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

I realy like this story! <3 but you forgot rin is still in the room with them o_0


Autumn (Chapter 16) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

Great chapter! I can't wait for them to tell Kagura. Update soon!


AmaViarra (Chapter 16) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

I have to say that I am disappointed..

 

Disappointed that I had not found this story sooner. I would have reviewed every chapter, but I was so addicted to the story, to your writing that I did not want to pause to review each chapter and wanted to continue reading until I was caught up. I apologize for doing so, but now that I am caught up, I will review as best as I can.

 

This story was very interesting. The summary made me pause and wonder if I should read it, Drama or a lot of drama in a story is a turn off for me. I decided to read the first chapter and decide where to go from there. I found myself addicted. While it does have some drama, or sad parts, it is done tastefully, not leaving me to feel overwhelemed with sad emotions but instead leaving me to feel many emotions, and of course eager to read the next chapter and more of this story.

 

I like how you write the characters, their interaction with one another, and everything else. (laughs) I honestly think I have been reading to many boy love manga because my mind keeps thinking that they are not just roommates and friends, but also are lovers and have that romantic relationship.

 

I also must say that when reading this story, and reading the part of Rin being Kagome's daughter, my first thought was 'How could Kagome survive the pregnancy without Sesshoumaru'. Thankfully that question was answered quickly, I like how you did that, along with the twins Kagome carries and the first born males being full demon, regardless of whether or not the mother was demon or human.

 

So basically to sum this all up. I love this story so far, and am eagerly awaiting your next update, take your time to do so~ I can't wait to read what you come up with next and see more interaction between the characters!!


Miss Anna S (Chapter 16) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

O-M-G
That was such a good update ^-^ I have been reading this story since it was on FF.net and I am so glad that you have put it on here, I can't wait until the ending...I have been waiting so long to see what happens. I hope that Kagura gets hers in the end.


vampwinter (Chapter 15) - Fri 10 Dec 2010

this chapter was perfect :)    she is going to be in for a shock when she comes too!


Autumn (Chapter 15) - Fri 10 Dec 2010

I'm glad she is able to sleep now. I can't wait to see what heppens next!


Selenay (Chapter 14) - Sun 05 Dec 2010

Oh yay@! He's there now! He'll protect her. Then, he'll learn Kagome has sons... And he'll realize how dangerous the situation is for her.


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 14) - Sun 05 Dec 2010

I'm loving your story! I look forward to the next chapter.

Have a fantastic week!

~~Mizuko~~


Tana_san (Chapter 14) - Sun 05 Dec 2010

Hi, I just found this fic tonight and though I feel it's moving rather quickly, it's been a good read. I can't believe Kagura thought to bully Kagome into giving up her child and passing her off as her own. I'm assuming that she kept away from Sesshoumaru or had some kind of spell or whatnot to keep him from smelling she wasn't pregnant, since little Rin was able to smell her father's scent within Kagome. You didn't give any explaination on this so I decided to use my imagination. This fic may have a few unexplained things but it's kept me curious wanting to know more.

Now with little Rin being asked if she would want Kagome as her mommy, I have to caution you on a few things. I don't know if you are a mother or how much ezperience with children you have, but I am a mother and had 5 yrs of Daycare and Child Developement. Rin may say right now that she'd like Kagome as her  mommy because she doesn't like the medicine she's forced to take or the things Kagura has told her about her father not liking hanyou. But you need to consider that Kagura has been her mother for what?, 5 years now?, and no matter what has gone on in their lives children will always still feel an attachment to their parents, especially a mother.

You need to remember Rin is still young enough to think it's alright to have Kagome as a mother because she was in her daycare quite often and they had a special relationship, but when it all boils down to who is Rin going to want when it's time to go home to bed at night, it's going to be Kagura. She put Rin to bed and took care of her needs, like when she was sick or had a nightmare. Rin going to think it was her fault that daddy left her mommy because she the medicine didn't work this time. She's not going to want her mommy angry or hurt because daddy is taking her away from mommy. I've seen children of drug addicted mothers believing if they leave their mommy, she might die because mommy always said they were her reason for living. Children aren't easily swayed like these last few sentences made Rin sound. Even abused children that are that young don't want to just leave who they have known as mommy.

I do so hope you don't take this as a flame. It's only meant to help, really. I'm truly waiting to see how Kagura explains her way out of fooling Sesshoumaru, an InuYoukai at that, that she was pregnant and then gave birth.    JEN


Madeline (Chapter 14) - Sun 05 Dec 2010

OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE THE STORY!!! Please keep up the awesome work!!! Update when you can!! I'll be waiting eagerly!!! :D


amy (Chapter 14) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

A THING OF BEAUTY!MORE UPDATES < PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!


Sunset Senshi (Chapter 14) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

So closeeee yet so far away ! I hope Kagome get's better especially now that Sesshomaru is around :) can NOT wait for the next update but I have to -pouts- anyways loveeeeeee it like always !


Lady Lyris (Chapter 14) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

I LOVE IT!! I scrolled down to go the the next chapter, and I was like "Damn it! NO!" lol. There were no more chapters left... :'( But I shall be patient and wait until you update! :)


Blaire (Chapter 14) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

!!!!:DDD awesome chapter! :)) can't wait for kagome to wake up!


88pieces (Chapter 14) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

oh yay its family time lol


Kat (Chapter 14) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

this story is awesome but it would be nice if you could make the chapters longer.....they are so short it only takes a min to read them....


Evee (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Nov 2010

I must say I love your story....PLZ UPDATE!!! I had class today and I was very tempted to skip it and contuning reading your amazing STORY! lol Keep up the great work!


Ajah Spencer (Chapter 13) - Tue 30 Nov 2010

You reallly need to update this story like everyday, cause its that good. I love all of the characters ways of making me feel like im the one thats preganet. You are ia very good writer and i love this story keep up the good work.


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