I've never read a poem here but I must say your writing is excellent. 
Then I looked up your profile & was very happy to find I'm not the only one my age 
      
Amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Jun 2010 
WONDERFUL 
      
| Very nicely written!  One of the more erotic things I have read that did not have all the intimate details listed...very powerful.  Great job!!
       
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 May 2008 
| I am SOOO glad you're here!  That certainly woke me up.  I love your hentai freaky pervy writing...you're the inspiration for sexy freaks and pervs everywhere.
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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