short, sweet, funny, full of action, and i loved every minute of it. great writing. i think this may have been your first fan fic story b/c of the errors in it. i did my best to translate and add to while i was reading. when i did it became more readable for me. i hope to read more of your wonderful stories. c'ya'

lol very cute short story.

Though it was a bit rushed....I enjoyed it! Great job

So wrong, it is a girl! Blossom is born!He fainted? lOLall the way!

hey i loved this story and thanks for not putting Inuyasha in it that was my fav part. i don't like him..hehe...this was hallarius and thanks

i thought that was so freaking funny. i love your story. *giggle* :)

hahhahhahhahhahahhahhahhahha oh my gosh this was a good story especially theending keep up the good work i hope to read more soon ^_^

I almost wet myself like 4 times while I was reading this because I was laughing so hard. LOVES IT!!!

Haha amazing ending. I about peed myself. <3 Poor Sessh lol. My dad was asleep the whole time my mother was in labor with me. He woke up when the nurses almost dropped me :) That's why I'm so special, I flew as a baby ;)

lol the no body no crime part on the last one was priceless but making her do 100 push ups is seriously funny XD

I guess even Sesshomaru isn't ammune to everything. lol

SESSHOMARU FAINTED?????????????

ROFLMAO, love it, love it, love it!

lmao =x hahahahahahaha so awesome!

phew....glad thats over....It wasn't bad for a battle scene I got some great imagery, but I'm not sure where ruins would be located in moderntimes so close to a city....XD....I'm glad that every bodies okay, I know that what could have happened could have been alot worse then what did....believe me some authors love to make their readers cry....but I guess that is good in of itself....well thankyou for updating now lets see if he can get back befor the birthing.....hehe............Nyuka

O_O man a live! i think i'm in love with this, i really hope that bank gets it!

Spend girls spend!

thats just awesome!

awe! loves! stupid bank!

you write so quickly... I think I said that but still it make me so happy...Thankyou.....Ya know the suspence is killing me, makes me feel more and more worried for this battle....I hope nothing goes wrong.......Nyuka

Take your time