I have to say, I really enjoyed to plotline in this one. It was different than most I have seen/read. I found it touching and frusterating at turns. The parts with the death of their pup was particularlly hard, having been in that situation personally. But I felt you did a nice job over all, especially for a first fict.
A mind blender of a chapter... good work!
Wispr
You have a truly twisted mind you know that!? Bloody funny story you got going here.
Now talk about split personalities! I like how you got the wedding cancel, wondering how Kagome's family will react.
Oh bloody hell the ending was funny... so hope the wedding gets called off though!
Oh can't wait for when the news comes out about Kagome... good chapter!
Good chapter, you really make my head spin with all of the secret identities! lol
Oh now that was a surprise where Kagome woke up... interesting way to write the chapter... worked well with what happen in it.
You really got things rolling along now... good job with how Kagome is suffering from her rememberings.
A truly heartwrenching chapter for Kagome... like the pizza-boy bit also.
A good chapter though didn't Sesshoumaru already visit that restaurant before?
I like how Kagome is having second thoughts about Hojo.
You really have created a twisted story... good work on getting the demons into today's society.
Glad to see Sesshoumaru isn't alone... like how Kagome is slowly remembering.
Oh bloody hell now that was a terrible ending... great chapter!
A nasty but believable first chapter... good work.
This story took me a couple of days to read, and it was well worth it! It was one of the best stories I have ever read. I really love it. Keep writing, I want to read more from you! ^^
oh so lame! Gaaaaaahhhhhh! my heart it breaks. Question: Why doesn't she remember what has happened since after the last battle?
This chapter brought up a question... Did kagome's family still remember kagome's adventures or was it forgotten by them too? And I really enjoyed the twist with the return of her memories, hopefully she'll remember the years she's been living soon for sess
Oh, that's hilarious. First his determined hand, then a lapdance. Poor Sess.
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