Wow! Please write more! I want Sessy to kiss Kags some more! More kiss details! I need a little smut in my life! Good story so far!
I'm sorry. I didn't quite get why Inuyasha was shocked, and his "accusatory tone", at the fact that Kagome accompanied Sesshomaru to their wedding. Afterall, Sesshomaru already told Inuyasha that Kagome was his girlfriend, besides, they did invite Kagome. ( : Otherwise than that, the chapter was wonderful. Shows that Sesshomaru will fight for Kagome, if need be. Kawaii! ^^
Kawaii! lol
Sesshomaru in a cooking class....that would be forth watching.
Selazul (Chapter 7) - Sun 01 Jan 2012
Wow .. I didn't think a story lIke this existed here. Itlag super alternate universe but they're really going through the phases of a relationship like NORMAL people in the REAL world. Nice job with sesh btw ;) love how thestory is playing out! Can't wait for more :)
More please! :)
Ocean (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 May 2011
Are you going to update? I love your writing form it's quite fluid! Thank you so much
yay you updated!
So far so good. :) Keep it up.
tiana (Chapter 4) - Sun 25 Jul 2010
lol i rlly enjoyed thiz chapter it waz rlly funny and cant wait for more plz update soon.
AWW...i think this fic is kinda cute. I like the way shippo is in the role of little brother instead of as kagome's son. please keep writing.
Zero1101 (Chapter 3) - Sat 24 Jul 2010
I like this story, since you first put it up I been hounding it for new chapters. I loved how Sesshomaru just asked flat out if Kagome would see him staurday, she almost spit out coffee lol. PLEASE keep this story going! I lovei t and you! Lol, see ya, and when I log on I'm favoring it.
Yukii (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Jul 2010
I feel like I should write this review because I have been following your story since the first chapter but I need to say before hand I do not mean for this to be a flame I'm going to try to keep this to constructive criticism as much as I can. I kind of feel like this story is rushed and and more telling of what is happening and not so much just showing it. It is strange for me for Sesshomaru to just ask her out after he thought she was bonkers after the first two meetings then pissed at her writing. That and it, as I said earlier, is more of just telling what is happening. Like she did this then this then this happened. No flavor or color to it. I hope you don't take offense to this I am just stating what my opinions on this are. I hope you will still continue your story ^_^
Like Maddie had pointed out below, I am still amazed by how someone like Sesshoumaru would read a magazine like that, but it fits the story pretty well and set the stage for further progress in the plot. He's such a great dad, to read articles which would help him raise Rin well. It's nice to see how this story is turning out to be deeper than what I had originally thought it to be :) I was under the impression that it was going to be a sweet, romantic fic, but the fact that you included societal trends and issues made it even more realistic and enjoyable.
Aha! So he asked her out. We will see where it goes from here! :) till the next chapter, take care!
Madison (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Jul 2010
This is a nice little story!
I'm finding it rather funny that Sesshomaru is reading such a magazine. ~giggle~
I think this could be heading in a nice direction, and to think it's your first fic, you're doing rather well. I will be sure to follow up on it! And I'm thinking Sesshomaru wants to examine her a bit, lol. And what were the chances he would read her articles huh? Bad luck or good luck? One thing for sure, Kagome is doomed since she has already fallen!
Of course, Kagome...anyone would be obsessed with something as gorgeous as Sesshoumaru!! *drooools*
This chapter was enjoyable as well, though there was no clear progress in the plot, you did address some background issues such as Kagome's family background, the setting, the common ties between Sesshoumaru and her (which is through the children) and her personality. It's nice, and do keep up the good work. :) I hope you're liking it here on Dokuga! This place is like one big online family:)
lalg01 (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Jul 2010
Hi! Really enjoyed the first chapter! Looking forward to reading more!
Hey there:) Here's a warm welcome from a fellow writer here on Dokuga, and I'd like to let you know that this is a very good start to a promising story. The grammar is sound, the descriptions are vivid and the light touch of humor makes this little chapter a good read. Keep writing, and I look forward to seeing updates from you :)
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