man! that was sssssoooooo good, i feel myself crying. i am so glad i took you advise about the tissues. thanks for that and great poem by the way :)

PURE POETRY!

'I' should always be capitialized, dear, even if it doesn't start the sentence. Fricking text speak is going to be the end of the English language.

Beautiful! I really like this. So much emotion is such a short passage. I hope to read more from you, especially if it's like this!

You've got talent, m'dear. You should definitely be proud of this poem.

Have you thought of turning it into a song, hmm??

Thank you for giving us the gift of your beautiful words :)

~Siki