I'm so glad to see this story return! I LOVE the drama! And as of last time I read, I don't think Sesshy was actually thinking disloyal thoughts that Kagura might be better for his image than Kagome. THAT TRAITOR! Maybe it's a good thing InuPapa stuck his nose in. If Sesshomaru can think thoughts like that, Kagome would have had her heart broken anyway! I hope you make Sesshy suffer for his disloyalty, TruGemni!!!!!!!
Oh I was looking back over your fic. Finally found the time to get this done. Chapter 9 is great but it still leaves me with more questions than answers. I'll make a deal with you. If you try and update your amazing fic ... I'll do the same.
| its been sooo long i almost forgot what this story was about...wow i cant believe this....touga better do something quick
| I never want Kagura to be with Sesshomaru. Grrr! Thanks for updating, I was waiting eagerly. More soon???
unknownmiko (Chapter 8) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
| i re-read the whole thing when i saw the new chapter. I love how you handled the whole Sesshoumaru and InuYasha's mother subject. and how Sesshoumaru grew to aleast respect Izayoi. But will Izayoi be able to help before Kagome leaves for the states? Will Kagome even listen if they try to talk to her again? she did cut all ties to the Tashio Family? oh oh still so many question's.
Nice work !!!
| whoa this is intense i cant believe but i think you should do something when you are changing scenes or going into a flashback but other than that i love the story so far
| I'm so glad you added a new chapter to this wonderful story, I re-read the whole thing, and I love it and can't wait for more.
This is my ideal Kagome/Sesshomaru story. It is so full of heartbreak... Such simple, honest emotion. Sorry to be so cliche', but please, please please update SOON!
unknownmiko (Chapter 7) - Sun 05 Apr 2009
| 'this Kagura business would definitely be a problem' Truer words were never spoken. Poor Kagome who had given up so much for everyone else is now being forced to give up the one she loves most in the world. (sob-sniffle) I say let Sesshoumaru's beast beat so some sense into his father. He hurt his best-friends family the people who he himslef looked at as family. And his slef-pity shouldn't be his only suffering. (sniffle)
But Oh what about Kagura? How does she feel about this whole thing? Did Kikyo and Inuyasha make it in time? So many question so little time?
I have to keep coming back for more. Even the few tiny problems i did see did nothing to take away from the plot and or story. Keep up the GREAT WORK!!
unknownmiko (Chapter 6) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
| Did Sesshoumaru kill his father? Did Inuyasha make it in time? On man come one. .how can you leave it like this. I need to know. is there going to be a happy ending or a sad ending? I have to know. Or you going to finish this fic? Please write more please I'll give you my chocolate chip cookie stash.
| Excellent play on the internal ruminations, of jealousy and inequity. Well executed.
Dedicated to knifethrower- hey, that's me!!! Just like in the anime and manga, Sess' dad strikes again, messing up Sess' life. What's up with that, I wonder? He was so concerned about protecting Inuyasha, but totally willing to nail Sess to the cross to do it. When someone is this oblivious, you have to wonder just a little bit whether subconsious motives are entering into what seem to be simply ill-considered actions. Jealousy of the aging alpha male, who sees a younger and stronger version on the brink of becoming strong enough to become the new king of the mountain? Maybe a little bad feeling that Kagome will fall too easily into Sess' arms? No need to cut Inuyasha down to size, he'll never be quite as strong as his father, but it may be kind of disturbing to contemplate his full-demon son eclipsing him. Hmmmm.....
The best chapter of all. Very beautifully written. Now I understand completely what Touga has been up to. What a jerk! Please write more soon, I'm hooked. Can't take withdrawl symptoms... Hurry, please....
Touga, your stupid plotting has really landed Sess in the doghouse! (Don't you hate it when someone tells you to sit down before they tell you something? It means it's really, really bad....) Bravo! This is a great story!
OMG, Sess, do what your inner demon tells you. This can't be good!
OMG, he didn't tell her. Sess' dad is rotten, and Sess is making a big mistake. (I love it!) Why oh why do I get so much enjoyment out of my two favorite characters suffering (because it just feels so good when they get back together again, that's why!)
I think I'm gonna love it.
| Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm in suspense!
| Very nice continuation. Keep it up. Am intrigued. Well done, lady.
| Very cool story you have going. I like the direction your taking & you've definately got me waiting in anticipation for the next chapter. Please update soon:)
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