I'm pretty anxious to know what happened. How did they go from a relationship of four years to Sesshoumaru up and mating someone else? I really like how it started.

Oh...I love that song. I hummed it as I read the chapter. The only issue I have is you should break that huge paragraph up because it was difficult to read. Other than that, I thought it was good.

Good start, I would definitely like to see more.