i wish it was longer :(  but it was awesome

I think you have a good polt going. One day you might think about expending on your idea and putting some more details into it. =)

Have a lovely week!

~~Mizuko~~

it was okay except it passed too fast and the summary confused me it said she meets sesshoumaru after she sees them but in the story he shows up a little after her but other than that it was good keep up the good work like they say rome wasnt built in one day plus i think it better than anything i can come up with ^_^

HE GOT WHAT HE DESERVED!