Wow!! I believe thats my fave oneshot, but to me is missing something. I dont know, but I feel that it shouldn't be a oneshot. To me it has momentum (sp? i think o.o) to be a short story.
MMMMmmmmm....yummy!
Amy (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Jun 2010
DELICIOUSLY SEXY!
hopuchan (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Jun 2010
that...was...an amazingly tantalizingly great little lemon! luvs it!
Excellent...erotic, yet sensual. I enjoyed this piece greatly. I commend you on your ability to write such a delicious lemon. I do believe I will add this to my favorite's list. JEN
perfect i loved it cant wait for another chapter. i like to see kagone use that brush on sesshoumaru now that woould be fun. thanks for a great read
O_O i LOVEs that! Paint the word Mine across her tummy could mean her, her womb, all of it! >_>
*greedy lil r0o*
*wiggles update bribery c0okie at you!
so hot >:3 i love this!
Tisha (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Jun 2010
yu know you may not write a lot of lemons, but when you do a person needs to take a cold shower to cool off. great job.
That was a very sensual lemon that you wrote. You did an awesome job. The imagery it inspired alone was on point. Keep up the great work!
OMG!!!!!! I loved IT! I knew you had it in you. It was lovely, and surprising, and sinful, and kinky but most of all SEXY! <3333333
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