Wow, this is a rich tale indeed! I'm very much anticipating the next chapter. Great work.
If the well closes, I hope she's pregnant so she can keep a part of him with her.  If she does have his child, I bet he will be one surprised daiyoukai when they eventually meet in her time.  But will he have a mate and several grown pups already?  Your first chapter has got me all excited with all the possibilities and different directions this story could go.   
      
ghost_youkai (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jun 2010 
This story was truly touching and beautiful. I hope to see this story progress later as the day continue ^_^ 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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