I think I like this one shot best, really wish you'd continue it!! It's so beautiful and elegant yet strangely haunting. I Adore it.
iLolita (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Sep 2010
This was really cute and sweet :) And I usually don't like ooc Sessho but you did it well Kuddos
okay so i LOVES that! and i want more? am i greedy? YUS? why? b/c i loes it and its awesome, and sexy, i cans ee this happening and i would love to see what happens from there! more please! - r0o
Awwwww!!! That was so sweet!!!! Please write another story like it, I love stories that are similar to the Moulin Rouge. They're the best!!! ^_^ Good story!!!!!
I sure enjoyed this, to extents where words would no longer do it justice! Now you, amazing author, made my entry for this challenge pale so much in comparison; it's almost white by now. Your spectacular use of vivid descriptions, sharp conversations and the fact that it was tied back to the original story made this a fabulous read! I will be following this story, and hope to see more of it soon :) Keep up the excellent work!
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