All three chapters are great, keep it coming.
Oooo this is getting very interesting! This whole mystery about Ran's father is killing me!
I can't wait for your next update!
D: oh noes!
Please don't leave such evil cliff hangers.
Happy Birthday To Me, Keep it coming.
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE
Keep it coming.
i loved this please write more
I just found this... Omg sooo good :)
I love your story. I look forward to reading more.
D:
omg. You leave me wondering how this is will all pan out. *hits you with inspirationz* Okay, go.
..Wow.
Amazing. . . . . . Please update soon!
xoxo
How sad.
I love the depth, especially with Kagome's insanity and Sesshoumaru's reactions.
Bravo!
Jazzy xoxo <3
ah Sesshomaru's feeling left out!!! haha >.< can't wait for more
WOW! Interessting fic. Kagome is so broken and it hurts to see her like that. I hope that there is a happy ending for her and sess though! Goof job and keep writing.
a very different idea
in some ways surprising
Wow Mate, Thats a great story. Sesshomaru is a replacment for his brother, that's gotta hurt his Ego somewhat. and now he wont let kagome go will he.
Keep on writing Mate, *goes and add this story to her Favorites.*
WOW. OUCH. poor Sesshoumaru!! hahaha well even though it is so mean it's almost funny, I still felt sorry for poor Sess. Keep up the good work!
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