lool Is there going to be a lemon or is it going to begin from the beginning? "Beat the cra* out of Kagome" xD lol kukuku to be honest, I did not expect that Inu would be this stupid... Because he heard his brothers demand to know, who Kagome bought... And the maid was already gone, before Inubaka spoke up. This means, that the maid was by Sesshomaru and answered his question...
kukukuku well yea... this is Inu... Now, that she is with him again... lol I have no idea what to expect... xD kukuku pls, update soon... :D
cheers
jojo661538 (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jun 2011
wow i expected them to end up together again but not quite like that you really through me off to think that sesshoumaru got so possesive of kagome he almost killed inuyasha keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
megan007 (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
I am so happy that you are having a great time writeing this story as I am having fun Reading it, and I am glad you are updateing!! LOL, I waS shocked on how like Wow she became Sesshomaru's slave again so fast LOL, I must admit I hope he does treat her ok this time, I feel like Kags is of a weak minded, yes she still has that firer temper of hers and she speaks her mind and regects Sesshomaru but why in the world does she like him after he has kicked her, hurt her, slaped her, Eww is she one of thoses girls that like to be hit!!! ewww that is so sick!!!. well i hope things get a little more intresting after this, I was shocked that Sesshomaru wants her so bad and gave Miroku so much money LOL.
update soon.
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megan007
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Lovin it so far! Can't wait to read more! (:
Sam (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
Great work! can't wait for next chap.
Crystal (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
Great chapter please update soon!!
LISA (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
LOVE IT!!!! can't wait for the next chapter PLEASE PLEASE update fast....^_^
(: (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
Love the new chapter! (:
Update soon! This story is great~
Dun, dun, duuun! Is that resentment between Sesshoumaru and Kagome? I can't wait for the next update! XD
really good continuation. I found the image of inuyasha walking in to find Kagome standing on Sesshomaru's bed poised to attack wiht a lamp, absolutely hillarious! I've found some areas though that I think could use a little literary fluffing though. How do you feel about some constructive critisism? If you'd like, I'd be happy to share with you my thoughts and offer some assistance, if I can. Just send me a PM and let me know if you are open to it. Otherwise, I'll just continue to review about what I liked, if you're not one of those writers who appreciate the C.C. :)
megan007 (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011
Wow, LOL I was wondering when you were going to update, LOL love it.
update soon!!!.
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Megan007
Wow... kagome, not smart girl! I think her mouth is going to get her into a lot of trouble. :-P Good start. I love that it really grabs your attention from the start, and you jump right into the action. loveys.
Hey! I'm glad you updated! oooh this is getting interesting. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will like having kagome in Miroku's care. I kinda feel bad for Kagura though. Naraku is horrible and I can't even imagine the psychological scaring that she has from his attentions. I hope that Kagome doesn't meet Naraku, in a dark corner of the castle. Fabulous story! Can't wait for more!
i love the chapter, but dokuga doesnt allow review replies in it's fictions. that's grounds to have the fic removed. if you'd like to reply to your reviewers you can go to their pages, and reply on their wall! I'm sure they'd love it!
it was a good chapter.
oh snap crackle pop.....i wonder if sango is gonna get all jealous.... :o
very intriguing indeed. i must say im very curious as to what is going to happen in the future of this fic please update soon
amy (Chapter 4) - Wed 08 Jun 2011
So when is his big day with kagome?
Lisa (Chapter 4) - Wed 08 Jun 2011
Great Story!! I like how u portray the characters ... can't wait till the next chapter..please update soon ^_^
Maybe there feelings for each other are moving a bit fast but i still like your stoy.
Cant wait for more.
keep up the good work.
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