Your story is so beautifully written, so well put together, I just find the Taisho Kagome thing a bit too much for my own sensibilities, maybe because I just find sleeping with your future mate's/husband's father/mother to be.... odd. How do you look that person in the face when you know your father was within them so intimately? How do they look at your face, knowing that you slept with the one who sired them, that if the seed had taken root, the one you're fucking could be your own child? *shivers* I just can't imagine it. I quite enjoyed the story up until this point and I'm betting it's still wonderful further on, however my sensibilities won't let me continue on any further then this. Thanks for the wonderful distraction.
--Kaminoko
Yeah...... I skipped the entire scene as soon as InuPapa started touching on her stomach. It's too weird for me. She slept with the father but is supposed to fall in love and sleep with the son later. *smh* Too awkward a thought for me. Or is this not a Sesshoumaru Kagome story?
--Kagome
O.o ehh please tell me there's not gonna be any Taisho Kagome romance. I'm getting a bit weirded out.
This is quite an interesting beginning. There are some places where you have mixed up words, using 'your' the possessive, where you should use "you're" as in you are such as "[You're] just scared" and "[You're] welcome to clean yourselves...". Beyond the few minor mistakes, I enjoyed it immensely. I will continue on now.
--Kaminoko
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
This is such an interesting take on the whole Sesshoumaru/Kagome relationship and the world that they live in! I am really looking forward to progress in the relationship between these two! Thank you!
lilonigiri05 (Chapter 24) - Mon 19 Jul 2010
Love it! I find your story absolutely fascinating :) It really captures my attention and the plot is flowing very nicely. Please keep up the great work :)
WOW!! I have just discovered this little gem of a story and I have to tell you I absolutely love it!! I've spent the last couple of hours laughing and crying! That scene where Kagome saves Tashio's life and then leaves him killed me, cried like a baby! I adore how Strong and powerful Kagome, yet still is so vunerable in many ways! You are doing a beautiful job with this tale and I can't wait to read your next chapter!
Crazy Awesome story! this would be cool as a InuPapa/Kag too! but i think it's really cool as a sessxkag!
Still going strong! Good chapter :)
Update soon, I beg of you! D:
You did very well at exploring Kagome's feelings and emotions. And the progress of their relationship is going well too! Keep up the great work!
dude i love this story and that last chapter was just so intense with them oh my god it was awesome. cant wait for the next one.
Hesunohana (Chapter 19) - Sun 28 Mar 2010
I love the plot of your fiction, but the beginning was difficult to follow. finally I'm glad I continued. the passages with Taisho were so sad some times...
Tisha (Chapter 18) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
There are few stories that take me on such and emotional rollercoster. Well done you have made the cut!. Please update soon.
Indie (Chapter 18) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
This has all the ingrediants for a perfectly crafted tale. The humor and drama, even the angst, are well balanced. It is exquisite in rich details and history. Not to mention one heck of some sexy scenes. The part where she had to leave Tashio was heartbreaking and acutely felt. Very very good. Certainly topping my list of amazing ficts. Keep it up, and looking forward to the next update.
memeylupht (Chapter 18) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
oowww..fluffy !! =))
finally.. But hey! I hope they'll continue in the next chapter ;p ..
oh! Go Koga.. Make him jealous,i woder though.. What'll happen when the boys come back o.O"
i'm so excited right now,you've done a real good job in this one too. So please update soon !!
memeylupht (Chapter 17) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
oww.. I really like it of course 'n keep goin' don't stop,ever !!! xD
finally,back to the present..but Sesshomaru hasn't showed up yet ??!
memeylupht (Chapter 16) - Wed 24 Mar 2010
i'm more than enjoyed myself when i read these chapters 'bout her past. even though it's so sad..x'(
i'm looking forward to read 'bout Sesshomaru again,i've been waiting for far too long =))..
i can't wait!!!!!
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