I had an idea similar to this (well, not the flower rain, mind you, that was GENIUS) for this challenge but I feel you wrote it way better than anything I would have been able to think of. It had a nice touch of humor and I liked the dynamics between the characters (and the paragraph talking about their reactions in succession made me smile). Good job! I look forward to reading more of your work :)
Woooo!!
Beautiful beautiful story!! Your are the first to actually do it in feudal era and flower-rain? Genious. Never thought of using the combination of Sesshoumaru's cloud with flowers and the reactions of the Inu-tachi was hilarious!
Approved, please grab the banner and keep doing an excellent job <3
PS:Happy Valentine's Day
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