I love it, so cute and funny, but you need to get a better beta, look at what all she missed! 
  
She was freaking out, where else could it have gone [too] to?! 
the noise into the forest and then into [a] another clearing. 
There she saw her skeleton, with the exception of the legs, 
  
*head slap* I did NOT miss all of this! I should have checked it over one more time! 
      
Jupe (Chapter 1) -  Sat 13 Feb 2010 
Pffffft!  This was perfect.  You're a doll, a peach, and a friend.  Thanks for brightening my day, hon. <333 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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