Loved it!

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

that was beautifully romantic... good to know he is more than just words but actions as well

Love defeats death... too bad it doesn't happen in real life.

Thanks for sharing your story and also a folk tale that was new to me.

Simply fantastic!

We are privileged to have your talents here.  Thank-you very much :)

Amazing! I was totally prepared for a sad ending  but i got a happy one! I'm  so glad. Thank you very much for this great fic, i truly enjoyed it.

so well written !

AMAZING!!! (I would think of better, more attractive words to describe this, but my hazy, sleep-fogged mind isn't able to function properly at this moment so please forgive me.)

Tha was beautiful. Honestly, I have a tear forming. Very well written and described, I loved it.

Wow! This was the best one-shot I've read in a long, long time. The language and word usage, perfect. Grammar was spot on and it had an easy to follow sequence of events. I can tell you did your homework and knew exactly what you were talking about. A++ ;D

^_^ That was so awesome and heartfelt!! *wipes tear away* Never thought what would happen if he relinquished Bakusaiga, great job!!

That was a great fic! To go down to Yomi and give a part of his soul to have his love back. That was awesome. Keep up the great work!

Oh wow... that was awesome!  I am speechless, and will bow out of the review now - after all, it is better to say little, and well, than to say much - and poorly.

Amber