I like this a lot :) Really pretty and you write with so much emotion. You should add more!

oh no!!! sesshoumaru dies in the first chapter?!?!?!  argh! but still i love angst. teehee.

i heard the song but i've never seen the video so i'm kinda confused as to why kagome says 'i saw you' at the end.  (it's probably just me though.)  I'm interested to see how this fic will progress.  Will it stay sess/kag or will it change?  What will happen to the baby? so many questions, so little chapters!

guess you'll have to update, huh. ^.~

ducky out.

How sad and tragic. It was well-written and you definitely had the right imagery going on with it. Maybe you could write a follow up , where she has had the baby and moved on. Anyways, excellent job!

That was so sad it brought tears to my eyes.  Poor Kagome.  I'm not a big Rascal Flatts fan, but I know the song and I was thinking about it as I read this story.  Good job, this was very well written.

I don't know what song this is, but I like the story. It seemed like you rushed through it, but other than that, good job!

So sad.  Somehow, it almost seems incomplete.  It seems kind of rushed, kind of like part of the story is missing.  Still, it is very gripping.

wow that was sad....*dabs at a tear*...i know that song, and you did very well representing it, very well done!!

Very nicely done, I could feel some of the angst that she was going through, but it was a bit rushed and you would be able to pull the reader in a bit more if you slowed it down a bit.

Hairann