I don't say this very often, but that was perfect exactly as is.  The flow, the structure, the plot, everything just perfect.  Throughout the whole thing I kept going back and forth thinking it was Sesshoumaru, then Inuyasha, then back again.  I couldn't quite figure things out and I loved that.  I usually can figure out the main points of a story rather quickly, but for once, you kept me guessing.  And I thank you for that :).

I really hope you do a sequel to this story as I am sure it will be just as great as this one.  And I hope to read more from you in the future.

Very good. I like your writing style, and I must say I was thinking the same thing as I was reading this. I am glad though that he is alright pre say. I tend to like darker style fics more than the bright and happy ones...sometimes. I would like to proudly state that you have filled my need for a darker fic today!

Ja Ne

This was a heart breaking story, and I enjoyed the angst. Although Sesshomaru was pretty OOC, he turned it around at the end, which was a nice twist to the plot. This is a great one shot, but has TONS of potential for a chapter story.

This was excellently done. I was very disappointed that there wasn't more to read actually...this would make an excellent beginning to a series of oneshots, or even a chapter story. I very much enjoyed this and will look foreward to more of your work in the future!

I like how you ended the story.  I agree that even if he had grown up human Sesshomaru is not the kind to just give up and die.  Even if you didn't mean for him to live I thought it was great.  You should turn this into a chapter story adding more backstory and I would love to see what he has planned to get her back. Great job.