I totally loved this story, especially how there was no rush to it and that they gained an understanding of each other so well. You did a great job!!!
Spectacular! As all your work is! I loved the intimacy you gave throughout the work without becoming cliche. And I don't just mean physical intimacy. There was a closeness about them that you showed without becoming too bogged down in details. If that makes any sense. And while I want more, the ending fits. And really, what's the point if everything has to be spelled out for the reader?
The only question I had was a small one. Regarding the shrine. You said that it was 150 years old. But I thought it had been there even in the feudal era. Because that was where Inuyasha stole the jewel from. Anyways, it really has nothing to do with the story. I was just curious. I haven't watched the show in years so I'm probably remembing it wrong.
i loved it!
I kind of enjoyed this story in spite of it being a sad one. They had understanding, comfort, and respect for each other but there was no love which is sad. On his part maybe a good thing since he would hurt even more when the day came she died because of her mortality. I feel sorry for his lonely, empty future without her. Anyone else he would meet after her would never understand him the way she did nor share a part of his past. Somehow, she should have had her life extended to match his so they could be together. Like I said, the story has a sad overtone because if he thought his existence was lonely before her, it will be devastatingly lonely after her.
Indie (Chapter 6) - Sat 20 Mar 2010
Such a beautifully sweet ending to a wonderful tale. I really enjoyed each and every one of the chapters. Keep writing.
Madison (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Mar 2010
I just read the whole thing, and I loved it :3
Not only was it very well written, and descriptive, it was a lovely story. It wasn't this epic love where they go screaming in the streets (o.0) but it is what made it very Sesshomaru & Kagome. I love the way your portray Sesshomaru, very like him, at least what he would be like after 500 hundreds years.
Amazing work!
SKYEEEEE THAT WAS SO SWEET! So incredibly wonderful. This whole story was fantastic and amazing. I absolutely adored all of it.
FourShotChild (Chapter 6) - Sat 20 Mar 2010
Absolutely wonderful.
This was an excellent series, but it doesn't feel done to me :) Ah well. Not the first time it's happened, not likely to be the last.
Indie (Chapter 5) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
I simply adore this story. You approached the whole subject with such soft finness; it is truly a delight to read. I love the way it moves along, flowing with easy. It's nice to see their relationship develop slowly over time like this. Keep up the good work!
Oh man! You could end it here or keep going! I have fallen in love with this story! Great job as always.
absolutely wonderful. ^-^ looking forward to more.
he's so mature and sweet, in his own way :)
:) I want him to pay me an ice cream too
That was a nice start!
TruGemini (Chapter 3) - Fri 15 Jan 2010
Another great chapter! I love how you interpreted this chapter. The contrasting personalities on how they were and are, and how their current world affects them. Great job lady!
skye you have a screw up.,
They last chapter, chapter 3 has replaced chapter one as well. So it's now posted twice and the first bit with the coffee shop has been deleted.
thought you should know
wonderful chapter. can't wait for the next one! ^-^
I like your interpretations. The meeting, first get together....that is an interesting way of describing it. Keep up the great work.
The was a great chapter Skye! Can't wait to read more of this. :)
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