you have brought me to tears... amazing so since your so wonderfully gifted at writing how about you update really soon?!?! hu hu? good idea huh? love the story. i have a feeling sesshomaru is going to rip some one face off!! lol ")

Oh....my....God!!!  OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!  I don't even know what to say right now.  This chapter was just so increadibly OMG!  I don't think I've ever read anything where Sesshoumaru was so desperate before.  I honestly was waiting for him to break down and cry because of the emotions that were flooding through him while he tried to find her.  Thankfully he had enough sense to realize that HE couldn't save her and that he really needed his beast therefore causing him to use the watch again. 

So, there is some angry youkai who works for Sesshoumaru behind the kindnapping.  Very original and I love it!  I could definitely see how with the dwindling youkai population there would be many out there who thought the jewel could bring their race back to it's former glory.  It's a shame he's not going to get his chance because from the looks of things Sesshoumaru found them.  Once he sees the injuries inflicted on her by him there is not going to be anything that will spare him.

It would also seem that Kiyoshi is very aware of what's going on.  Something tells me he is going to be one powerful pup if he is able to protect himself and his mother from inside her.  He recognized a threat and decided to take action against it.  He is definitely going to be a momma's boy LoL.

My heart was pounding when Kagome hit that wall.  God I hope that Sesshoumaru gets to her in time because whether either of them want it or not it looks like Kiyoshi is about to make his grand entrance.  Hopefully they will have time to call the doctor but I have a funny feeling Sesshoumaru is going to be delivering his son.

You know I don't know how I'm going to wait till your next update! I'm so anxious as to what is going to happen next that my head is swimming.  Your story has just captivated me from the beginning and now that things are getting heavy I'm just busting at my sides!  Excellent excellent work as always Maddie!!  **Extra big huggs** for this week because you are amazing!!!

Poor Sesshoumaru's luck and he will change back from his youkai form to the human looking Sesshoumaru right when he needs to beat the crap out of these idiots.. Whew, could they be in any more trouble...if only Sesshoumaru's beast could learn to share!

OMG KAGOME IS IN TROOOOOUUUUBBBBLLLEEEE! I wonder what will happen next? :P Nice chapter, update soon! :D

Ahhhhhhh the suspense is killing me!!! Please don't let your fan die!!! :)

Wow! Kidnapped or um Wifenapped something like that. This story just keeps getting better and better. Also the whole holding hands thing was great.  You go into so much detail I just love to read all the thoughts you have for the characters. Keep the good work comin' 

omg he better find her a.s.a.p! please update soon i cant wait! love the story.

I just love it!!! I didn't have internet connection for a month and what I missed the most was this story. It's really amazing how little by little he is realizing his feelings for her. Is the beast somewhat becoming one with him again or not yet? I hate to have them separated but I understand it has to bo that way. Wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!! This is so exciting!! I could almost see their faces when they held hands, that was sweet!

un tel suspense ! ça devrait pas être permi ! (rire) à quand la suite ?

*gasp* OH NO!! KAGOME!!

please to be updating!!

AH! Crap! O_O Good thing she left the jewel with him. Gah I hope he gets there in time. Major cliffy. >.<  i can't wait till the next chapter. now I go to pace around my room and wonder what will happen.

I'm glad they're getting closer. and the holding hands moment was cute. ^.^

Glad your Grandmother is getting better too. ^_^

*$#&$(#(@&$ HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  LoL okay I've gotten that out of my system so it's time to move on.  So Sesshoumaru thinks by distancing himself from her it will make things better?  Ugh I just want to smack him upside his head!  That is absolutely the last thing that he should be doing. 

I was very surprised by their conversation as to what they would do when Kiyoshi is born.  Neither one had thought about how they were going to share custody once he was born.  The fact that Sesshoumaru immediately told her that he would move closer to where she lived so she wouldn't have to travel far was very touching.  He had to understand that for her to be apart from him for any amount of time is going to kill her and that it wasn't an option for her to move.  As he said it's just a house to him and he can move alot easier than she can.

I was almost expecting him to offer his assistance in schooling and I think that, that might come later or it could be just an after thought but it was cute none the less.

I'm really curious who that person was who was staring at her.  I wonder if it is someone from the past, someone who is after the jewel or just someone who's got a grudge against Sesshoumaru.  It is possible that this person would think to use Kagome and Kiyoshi as ransom if that is the case.  I do wonder how she could have been so distracted by him though that she nearly got hit by a car.  Kudos to Sesshoumaru for being a little quicker than the average human!

I'm proud of him; both of them really.  Honestly when he asked her if he could hold her hand I was expecting her to say no, and that she would just walk right next to him or right in front of him.  But she said yes.

Kagome knew something was up and she really should have voiced her concerns.  I know she's trying to be strong and show that she is independent but we all need help once in a while.  Thank goodness she thought to at least leave the jewel with him before she went into that bathroom.

I really really really hope that he finds her.  I have been going through it over and over again who could have possibly taken her and I'm just at a loss as to who it could be.  I am really curious as to why he couldn't smell her and I have to agree with the beast that someone was probably masking her scent from him.  15 minutes is not a long time and unfortunately that's all he's going to get since Kagome is the only one who can remove that watch.  He better find her quickly!!

Now, I will forgive you for leaving me with a major cliffy because I just noticed that I never commented on the last chapter and I feel awful about it.  Sorry Maddie :((  Last week was crazy busy and I know I meant to do it and it just slipped my mind.  I apologize!!!  Congratulations on your nominations, you deserve them!  Best wishes as always to you, hope that grandma is getting better!!  **Big Huggs**

Hey Again i kept checking me email for a fanfiction alerty come this morning nice little surprise in my inbox.

is it me or does Kagome always seems to get kidnapped in the series and in alot of fanfiction..... Now who took her? it would have to be a demon right? it was the stranger with the onyx eyes? Now the main question will the beast find Kagome in time? im still curious about how they took her. right in front of our beloved demon lord.

Dangit i dont like cliff hangers either...........

okies i need to get up and dressed for the day.

Cheer mates and have a good day mate im still loving this story even with the cliffhangers

This was a very good chapter. I wonder what took Kagome at such speed away from Sesshoumaru? And what was their motive behind the supposed attack? Lets just hope that the person who has Kagome is a friend and not an enemy. This chapter was amazing and I hope that you UPDATE SOON!!!

I waited everyday, watching for an update. I was so happy that you updated. Whew...now I will worry for Kagome, why did you leave us like this? I will just have to hope that you update soon, because this is big!!! Sesshoumaru "the beast" will not horse-ass around with who or what ever has his Kagome. I just wish Kagome had just explained herself. Kagome should try to see that if Sesshoumaru is trying so hard he would listen to whatever she has to say. Now, I just hope his beast doesn't mess everything up. Great chapter, and I really, really hope you update soon.

As promised you updated and now I'm reviewing! :P

Anyways nice job! I cant wait to see what happens to Kagome and Sesshoumaru in the next chapter! I wonder who kidnapped Kagome... Oh well still gotta wait to see! Oh and thank Eve for me! Together you guys made one awesome story!

Excellent chapter... I wonder who has Kagome... anyone from the past? oooo I feel bad for whoever has taken her... they are in for a world of hurt!

Yessssss!  Sesshy to the rescue!  Please, hurry with update!

Nice story! I finally finished reading what you have done so far and it is very awesome! Kagome and Sesshoumaru have a strange relaishionship and I'm glad you made it so it would be diffucult. I kinda hate it when people make it so falling in love is so easy. I know I shouldn't judge others but... Off topic now lol. Update soon so I cant read one of my fav stories!

ha ! toujours cette ambiance si tendue et si...électrique. tu écris vraiment bien en anglais, je m'en émerveille à chaque fois ! (rire)

mais maintenant, que va-t-il advenir d'eux ? maintenant que le bébé arrive, que Sesshoumartu commence à se poser des questions, que Kagome se senty de mieux en mieux avec lui. et surtout, ils n'ont pas répondu à cette question si importante : quoi faire à propros du "mating bond" ? (gros suspense)

bien, je verrai ça la rochaine fois. bon courage pour les prochains chapitres !