oooohh!! i wanna hear what "verbal diarrhea" inuyasha is gonna spew! please hurry and update!

its intriguing. definitly. you need to work on your grammer a bit, it was slightly confusing at the start because of all the commas but other than that its going really well. oh and inuyasha or inu-baka is being a real jerk. like thats a difference from normal though right?

Seriously! what's with all the authors of the stories i read? it's like they're all out to get me... ahhhh run for the hills... wait... i need to run away from the hills... ^.^ would you kindly write more please?

It sounds like it is time to kick Inuyasha out of the group altogether.  He is nothing but trouble.  Of course, I don't think Kagome made a very wise choice letting Kouga join her group either.  He will spend more time trying to persuade her to be his woman than hunt for shards.  Plus, he might try to take over as alpha.  Can't wait for more!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

I've just started to read your story and I think it's wonderful!  Thank you for having Kagome beat Inuyasha with her own miko strength instead of her "sit" spell.  Of course he is too stupid to realize it, but I think that proves she is a real leader.  The only problem I have is that I don't think that Inuyasha deserves to be Beta.  Isn't that the second in command?  Someone who works with the Alpha to keep everyone safe?  Inuyasha obviously can't work well with anyone else so I think Sango or the monk should be beta.  Together with Kagome they make an excellent team.  Inuyasha only tears them down.  Can't he be delegated to waterboy or firewood gatherer?  Please update soon!  Can't wait to read more!

Great start to what can be a veeeery interesting story! Kudos to you! Xxx

Awesome!!! ...Inuasha's a jackass in this story. Poor Inuyasha, you'er a cruel casualty of artistic freedom. Heh heh heh. I'll be waitin for an update :3 it sounds too good to miss. I'm like Sesshoumaru, I need the entertainment. And this certainly looks entertaining.

I like it please update soon =)