Awww cuute! I hope Rin got better! Great descriptions. I really liked the part when Souta opened the door to Miroku and Sesshoumaru and Miroku says he has heard a lot about Souta. So many thoughts popped into my mind as to how cool it would be to meet Miroku, a monk from 500 years ago. What would his hair be like? How would he smell (hopefully not bad, lol)? What would his robes really look like? and so fourth. I pictured a real life man in my head and the scenery of the shrine and Kagome's house. It got me all giddy for a minute there!
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Oct 2009
I love that the future Sesshoumaru and Kagome wanted to see their previous selves. Very cute story! I like Sesshoumaru's reactions to Kagome's costume. I would love to read a sequel about how Kagome and Sesshoumaru start to grow closer! Great story!
Aw! That was bittersweet. Nice job!
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Oct 2009
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