I had to stop and review less than halfway through the chapter, to tell you I love how you have portrayed Kagome's second job.  Naraku is the perfect creepy boss.  Very realistic.  And I love, love, love the way you have written Jakotsu's character.  I loved the bubble gum detail!  It was SOOOO perfect!  I liked the way he came into her dressing room, making up an excuse to protect her from Naraku.  I love this story!

Wow, this chapter was really long, and full of wonderful descriptions.  You made it so I could picture everything.  I love how you portrayed Kagome, Sango and Miroku.  I actually worked at  a restaurant serving breakfast just like that.  You descirbed it so wonderfully, walking to work through the sleeping streets of the city, and the cameradrie of opening the place up early in the morning.  I like that InuYasha, Sesshomaru, and their father are going to be in the story.  I love it when they are portrayed as a family.  I'm glad Kagome was a little cautious about giving her phone number to InuYasha.  She should still be cautious.  Being invited to a "party" by a guy like InuYasha, could turn out to be not a safe thing for a pretty young girl.  But we all know that THAT's not the real danger in this situation.  InuYasha was looking at her pretty strangely.  Was he already involved with Kikyo, and he's interested in Kagome because of the resemblance?  I can't wait to find out more...

I gotta say I really like how this story reads so far. The chapters progress smoothly, and the characters' reactions have solid reasoning and meaning behind them. Great job so far, please continue.

So much drama already. And there's bound to be more in the next chapter. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha's reaction is going to be. Will Inu Tashio approve? Update soon! :D

Kagome has to realize that this is the same party that Inuyasha was telling her about.  However, Sesshoumaru is so gorgeous I don't blame Kagome for forgetting all about Inuyasha.  Wouldn't anybody?!  Thank you for the two great updates!  I really hope that Kagome quits working for Naraku, he's creepy.  I hope that Sesshoumaru is able to keep Kagome safe!  Post more soon please!

oh no! Poor Kagome. I would not like to be in her shoes... no wait.. yes I would! haha. Can't wait to see what happens at the party!!

Love it!

Woe...another chapter. Unbelievable !!!

WOW!! That was fast. I hope all your chapters are like this!!

Wow! Great story so far. I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru is going to be officially introduced in this story (even though we've already caught a glimpse of him). This is definitely a great story in the making, and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'll be looking for an update! :D

Well, I like it! I am just wondering how Sesshoumaru ends up? You do indeed have the making of a long Great story! I just hope that every chapter is as long as this one! I think long chapters keeps the story flowing more easily in the reader's mind. But thats just mt thought here! I hope to become a loyal fan of this story!!

Poor Inuyasha.  Even if this story is in an alternate universe, doesn't he realize that Kagome is made for Sesshoumaru?  He really doesn't have a chance.  I wonder what Kagome will wear to the party, especially since money is so tight.  Can't wait for your next chapter!  I think this story is going to be fun!