This was beautifully done; excellent mechanics, lovely plot, brilliantly executed.  I am GREATLY looking forward to some additions, should you be so inclined.  I can see this taking on a life of its own... HOPEFULLY!  It was a delightful read, and I thank you for sharing it with us!! :D ~~Wiccan~~

And that story I really want to know. I DO hope you continue with these sets of drabbles. It was a wonderful idea and I really enjoyed reading it. LC

This does mean that you've promised us another story, doesn't it?   I would really love to read what happens next.  Thank you for writing this excellent story.  I'm really afraid that Kagome is opening herself up to a world of hurt thinking that Sesshoumaru could like her.  I would love for you to prove me wrong!  :)

Oh wow!! this was so cute and funny! this kind of story doesn't need to be continued but IF you wanted to you know, you'll get no objections from me lolz!! Keep up the great work!

I just LOVE Rin!  And the things kids say... boy is THAT right!  Great Job... would love to see this one go somewhere.

Amber

I loved it. Nicely written, and you seem to have "followed children´s logic" well. And really, children´s logic is simple....and simple works, lots of times. Hahaha, I agree with Rin. :) Now I wonder how old she could be, because it´s true that she seems young while drawing the picture, but acts more mature and older when she talks....but it works, since lots of kids can be serious and more-or.less mature in one moment, and then go all childish when engaged in another activity. I really like your portrayal of Rin.

Poor Kagome though, now she has that stuck in her mind.

I´d love to read a continuation of this sometime.