That is so lovely!

Beautiful first chapter.  Too bad it's wasted as a one-shot.  It would make a fantastic beginning to a beautiful story.  Even if the story is short.  I want to know if he actually gets Kagome in the end since the ending is left hanging.

Awwww....*sniff sniff* this one is so sweet...I am so happy for Sesshoumaru,

Lovely one shot, well written and sentimental but in a believable way.