Please continue this!!!! It just got to a really really interesting part!! why, did it have to end here why????? Good story so far by the way. Keep it up. 
      
jacquelin (Chapter 9) - Mon 17 May 2010 
Are you going to finish this story i really love it and its very intriguing and interesting its just so wonder please finish this story! 
      
stars (Chapter 9) -  Sat 12 Sep 2009 
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