Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Lauren (Chapter 81) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

--I want to review chapter eighty, but I don't think I'll be able to. The review would end up being five pages. @_@ I'll spare you.--

Gah! I was right. Nothing good can come from Jack and Jill. T^T Hisoka-sensi became too comfortable (or as comfortable as possible in his situation) with his nightly routine and didn't properly scout the area for spies or his lord's father. *pokes Hisoka-sensei* Ugh... And now we know how it happened. I'm guessing that the Inu no Taisho has been thinking on this plan for at least a few days. Hisoka-sensei, though loyal, knows to not only remember his place, but to whom his loyalty was first given. I'm sure the veiled assurance he recieved from Kagome of their re-meeting helped sway his actions. If she hadn't any knowledge/memory of him in the future, how could she be meant to return, no?

*sighs* Well, what's done is done I guess. We can have a good scream and cry in chapter eighty-four(?), and Kagome and Hisoka-sensei can grovel over their missteps and half-truths. I'm hoping we'll check back in with the Inu-tachi before Kagome's sent home though. Speaking of which... Which "home" will Kagome be sent to (I'm guessing her original time (since that's where Hisoka-sensei had sent her back from), where she goes into a partial "shock" then jumps back - desperate - only in to land in Inuyasha's time)? And just who is that boy?! >.> I have a inkling as to who he may be, but we haven't touched back on the future, so there's no way to be sure. *pouts* Theres still so much left to cover that'll come before the confrontation... Oy.

Congrats again on the win! As if it wasn't going to happen. Hope you enjoy the rest of your weekend! Thank you for another fantastic update!!
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Autumn (Chapter 81) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

Oh I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!


AmoraLynn (Chapter 81) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

Oh goodness. What will happen next? I'm getting so excited to see them rejoined!


Makuro767 (Chapter 81) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

FORTHY!!!! YOU MAKE MY SICK DAY BETTER!!!! I hate cold.... AAAAAAAHH~CHOO!!!!!!


katlady (Chapter 81) - Sat 04 Dec 2010

^^ OMG I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS ONE XD

 

I LOVE IT I  guess  you  be ending this soon bnut  I still love it update again soon


AmberEyes (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

I am SO excited right now! I know I told you that I'm not one for incomplete stories, but even so, I am so super happy right now! I love your style! Can't wait for the next installment, thank you for sharing this wonderful-ness with us =]


JessB (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

I laughed so hard in the last exchange for this chapter.  I do enjoy this story.  You are very gifted.


naqaashi (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

woot! things are a-movin' eh? :D i cant wait to see what happen's when she get's back to her widdle fiance...and he's all grown up and pretty!


animejunky78 (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

Wonderful chapter as always.  This is getting so good.  I'm biting my nails each week waiting for more.  Things are really coming to a head now.  I can't wait.  I now understand why nobody could figure out how the two of them left.  That was totally unexpected.  Bravo!  Cant wait for the next chapter.


Renee Mannings (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

Oh Damn! I can't wait for them to be reunited in the future. 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

mou :[ part of me hates inupapa, though another part understand the concern of a father, even a puppy father. Still it all seems needed and cruel. *feels sad as an over all.* i wonder if inupapa will be able to really understand what he's going to do to his own son, to take so much from him, even if it is for his own good. Kinda makes me  all >:l at him.


Margie (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

eeeeee! Congrats! :) Wonderful chapter... I can't wait for moree! :DDDD


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

Eeeh.  Well that certainly pushed things along.  Poor Sesshoumaru :(  I have a feeling htey won't even get to say goodbye.  Wonderful chapter (as usual).  Things are definitely building momentum.  I liked the way you set up this chapter.  At first I had no idea what they were doing, but as I kept reading it made for a very nice "ah-ha" moment.  Great job, I can't wait to see what happens next!  Keep up the good work. 


Fox (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

D'awww.. <3 Beautiful, sad, and ominous... I can't wait to see what's next!


Naomi (Chapter 81) - Fri 03 Dec 2010

at first my reaction was NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

 

But I am SO curious to see what will happen when Kagome goes back to her own...uh...times..

 



loveyaa (Chapter 80) - Thu 02 Dec 2010

I liked that there were a bunch of little stories in this chapter. Although I think that my favorite part was the intro when you said that "There’s a rhyme and reason for this jumble of snippets... for when time is short, moments are precious". Things are moving along and things continue to become complicated. I feel really bad for Hisoka. He is being pulled into so many different directions. everyone is trying to carry out their agendas. I wonder whose will overcome all the other. I mean all things end well...well mostly :)


Selenay (Chapter 80) - Tue 23 Nov 2010

Woah, what is this? Are they abducting Kagome that night? Or are they taking more tests on the well? Poor Sesshoumaru! No wonder he got all crabby... His pack was all gone...


Ryne (Chapter 80) - Sun 21 Nov 2010

Another good Chapter!  he drabbles are absolutely awesome.  I'm a senior in college so I don't get to go out much, so I really look forward to these.  Good job, see you in a couple weeks!  Happy Holidays!!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 80) - Sun 21 Nov 2010

Thank you so much for putting this out there! I truly enjoyed reading all of these prompts. The story line is so detailed and exciting, I feel like I'm truly learning something new along with the characters.

 


Hesunohana (Chapter 80) - Sun 21 Nov 2010

wow ! very long this one ! I like it.

 

finally, the preparations seem ready. "seem" I say. but is Kagome ready to go ? I wonder.

 

the one with the baby was sweet, the one with the swimming lesson and and the miko lessons are also great.

 

see you in two weeks, I hope, ad good luck with wathever you're doing.


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