Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Madeline (Chapter 70) - Sun 05 Sep 2010

Oh my I can't wait to see what happens!!!! I'm loving this story more and more every chapter I read! Please Keep up the awesome work!!! Update when you can!! Thanks again!!!


GreyEcho (Chapter 70) - Sun 05 Sep 2010

AH! I wondered if it would come out that shye was a miko. Now I HAVE to know HOW they found out! >.<

I Can't wait! XD


loveyaa (Chapter 70) - Sat 04 Sep 2010

Dun Dun Dunnnnn... I wonder how this changed everything. I can't wait to find out either. I love that you are still finding ways to throw in twists and keep things interesting. Also congrats on Hisoka. I can't wait for more :)


kyokotashio (Chapter 70) - Sat 04 Sep 2010

Oh yay!!!!!!

I was wondering if Kagome's miko powers would ever make an apperance. Even is she did have complete control over her powers there are bound to be some slip ups when a miko is surrounded by all the yokai energy 24-7.

Especially if she is surprised and stressed or protecting someone(hint hint ^.^)

Im sooo happy T3T


elley (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

I was wondering when her miko abilities would come up!


Darrakk (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Thank you for writing this story and keeping to it. I really enjoy reading it. I only wish the chapters were longer! Want there to be more of this story every time I reread it. I really hope this story is expanded someday, going into the details where you only tantalize us so well!

Thank you for writing this, every time I see the email alert I almost do a happy dance. 


Eve (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

You have my undivided attention!

Please update soon - I just need to know what happened.  hahahaha

 

 


Melly (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Oh, nooooo!  The cat got out of the bag and there was a twist!!!!! o.o;;  I must know what the rest of the cat's memories... the suspense is killing me!  Each chapter is more intense than the last and BETTER.  Update soon, story guru!!!  


Addy (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

>.>  Oh shiznap.


Lauren (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

*dies* I think I'd almost forgotten that Kagome was a miko. Or maybe I'd forgotten that they had to find out... Either way, I have been waiting for Miroku and Hisoka-sensei to meet up and talk for weeks! I cannot wait to see what he'll dig out of Hisoka-sesei.

I love how within ten minutes of posting a new chapter, you have like five reviews. XD

'Til next I guess,
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Margie (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Awesome chapter! :)


Fox (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Love it of course! I got to peek on Dokuga_contest, and it's no less of a joy to read now!


MimiR (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

I love Hisoka. He reminds me in many ways of Remus Lupin. Can't wait for the next chapter, as usual great job! (I've never reviewed one of your stories before, but this is the 3rd one I've read. They're all great!)


Ao-tan (Chapter 70) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

OMG OMGGGGG A CHAPTER ABOUT THEM DISCOVERING HER BEING A MIKO HOLY HELL YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!

 

 

i am so happy (Q u Q     )


Bobby (Chapter 31) - Tue 31 Aug 2010

 this is a GREAT story

 


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 69) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

WOW..... it just keeps getting better and better update soon i love it


Janey-jane (Chapter 69) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

I just love the way you slowly reveal bits of insight and fill in the gaps in the overall story. Every chapter I love Hisoka more and more.He's such a smooth-talking, clever beastie.

Poor Sesshoumaru, poor Inuyasha, poor lil' baby Shippo! I want to climb into the story and cuddle them.

I think you convey that confilcted father-son relationship incredibly well - especially considering that Sesshoumaru and Inupapa hardly have any actual one-on-one interaction 'on screen' as it were.

 


Lauren (Chapter 69) - Sat 28 Aug 2010

An interesting chapter. It's funny how alike Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are, even in their ability to be polar opposites. Hisoka-sensei is such a cat. It's nice to see that they're all becoming more pleasant, if not familiar, with one another.

Inuyasha's ears are so adorable. ^o^ That half-cocked look you described sounds cute and hilarious.*waits for someone to draw it*

Are the kisune no longer playing their tricks on the Inu-tachi because they're now under Hisoka-sensei's protection? Or have they just become bored with the group? ...I wonder what Kirara, Miroku and Sango are doing during the day...

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


kuro (Chapter 69) - Sat 28 Aug 2010

Poor boys, I don´t know who I pity more. Sesshoumaru who has been deserted and alone so long, Inuyasha who has seen so much cruelty and lost his best friend or Shippo, who is still so young and misses his friend who has loved him unconditionally from the beginning? Strange how such a simple but unusual girl like Kagome brings the best out of everyone. That´s why I love her character so much and shame on those who claim her to be a MarySue. She is far from being perfect but all her quircks and temper make her a loveable character.


sakurachan_1 (Chapter 69) - Fri 27 Aug 2010

oh man loving every moment of it!

every time i read one of the chapters i just

get really into it ...  

just wondering what happen to kagome and 

how she is going to come back ... and all the

problems that would arise when she does come...

you have a great way of writing ...

you capture the reader that we just 

want to keep on reading more...

 

 

 

 

update soon!!!!


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