Reviews for The Breeder by Texanlady

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KagomeLove2 (Chapter 30) - Fri 22 Jan 2016

Hi, This is the second  Sessh and Kag story. I like this one better. I do not see them as a couple but still wanted to read one story about them just to see what it was all about.  I really liked yours. I like Sesshomaru in your story more than Kagome just because he does make me smile ( the way you presented him) he got the best lines. I fell sorry for Kagome as been rape for nealy a year is sure hell.  I am so glad that she has a collar on ( really I do not feel sorry about that, I actually though " good" you will see how Inuyasha felt.). But, I guess she is in such a shit sutiation that she does not see the irony of it. The Dog put the collar on the human girl. That was priceless Llooolll

I know this is a dark story but every time Sesshomary ordered Kagome to "present herself for breeding" I though about her not been able to shout  " Osuari " and laugh ( I know I should not but it could not be helped). I really felt like crying when he punished the 1rst time and whipped her, pissed on her and asked her to swallow his urine. 

Now what I do not like is the fact that they will be love each other in the end. I think it would have been excellent if they in fact do not end together. I find it unrealistic that Kagome could forgive all those months of abuse even if it is so that their children have a happy family. I mean I do not think that Kagome in the manga or anime will. She is human not Jesus. She is kind hearted but not an idiot. As a women from the 21st century she will not forgive my lovely Sessh.

I can already see that she does not know what she wants in comparison  to Sesshomaru. One day she says she will leave with her children, another day she want the kid to grow up with a father presence, playing with him. One day she will escape and another day she will sacrifice every thing so that her children will be happy in the loving family.  Poor girl once Sesshomaru start playing with his sons ( as I am sure soon she will be puppep) her heart will melt and Sesshomaru will smirk and think "I told you I will succeed ". Andd he will as you have already decided that he will get the girl. So regardeless of what karma will bring his way he will still get HIS Kagome and her love as like we say in my country " In life, it is the end result that count" and like kenji said Sesshomary has eternity and will succeed.

Why Inuyasha has to pay an heavy price and not find happiness? Yes, he made a stupid decision but Kagome could have said no. He did not own her, he was not even her boyfriend. She was stupid too Because she did not voice her opinion which is very uncharacteristic of Kagome. She is paying for her stupidity  and so is he but, if she find happiness with her abuser ( because that what Sesshomaru is even if you make hi behave better) in the end then Inyasha should also find love too. Why should Sesshomaru be the one to have it all?

It is your story and I like it regardless of those few points. I will continue to read just because I love  Sesshomaru . On another not, my  username is very misleading as I do not like Kagome that much in the manga/ anime. In fact out of all the females in the manga she at the bottom of my list at the same level as Kikyo. hope to read you soon.

KagomeLove2


SilentQuill23 (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jan 2016

At first this was just an interesting diversion when I should have been updating my own story.  I am now greatly interested is what you have planned next for this story!  I am eagerly awaiting an update!!


Orionda (Chapter 5) - Tue 05 Jan 2016

Hello! Just a quick question considering the third chapter, where Sesshoumaru goes to meet Bokuseno. I started to read this story for the 4th time again, I just cannot keep myself aways from it. :D

 

The question:

- It was stated by Bokuseno, that Kikyo will never be able to have children since destiny-wise, she is not meant to exist anymore. So I understood that everyone, who Sesshoumaru has ever revived or will revive with Tenseiga, will be unable to reproduce in this story? I don't know how relevant this information is considering this story, but that would also mean that Rin would never be able to have children too, right? Because her original destiny was to be slaughtered by the wolves in a young age.

Or, is there somekind of a rule that as long as the dead person is revived in a short time line after their death, they would still be able to have children and their destiny wouldn't be affected so strongly? After all, Sesshoumaru revived Kikyo properly over 50 years after her death, while Rin he saved only after minutes or hours after her death?

 

Thank you if you find time to answer! I'm just being curious. :D


Shelly (Chapter 30) - Mon 04 Jan 2016

I read your story in one night! I couldn't get enough of it. Your writing skill is very good and I love the character development for kagome and especially sesshoumaru! Update soon ???? 

 

Ps. I made a dokuga account just so I can leave a review for how awesome you're making this story!! 


gildedglass (Chapter 30) - Fri 01 Jan 2016

I have an idea for the plot... How about Inuyasha teams up with Sango and Miroku, for the sake of Kagom'e freedom? And maybe, just maybe he can start on his road to redemption. :) Thank you for the update, Texanlady! Beautiful as always... I can't wait for Sesshomaru to really start regretting his mistakes. 

Cheers!

Stardust Miko


Elena (Chapter 29) - Wed 30 Dec 2015

Why do we always blame others for our wrongdoings. It's amazing how convincingly we can lie to ourselves.

 

Love this story. Sad that there are only 2 more chapters but I'll go and read your choices and consequences story while I wait for this one. 


Elena (Chapter 18) - Wed 30 Dec 2015

I'm loving this story and am glad it's not discontinued like so many others on this site. Just one thing that always bothers me about Sesskag stories. People forget that even though Kagome becomes mated to Sesshoumaru and gains a longer life, She is still a human female and there for has limited egg supply. So sesshoumaru saying he will pup her every 25 years won't work. Maybe it can be said that Sesshoumaru doesn't know about the limited supply of human eggs or something but the inaccuracy of that statement always puts me off. At most she can have kids for the next 25-30 years and that's it. Anyway don't give up on this story. I realllllllllly want to see sesshoumaru grovel and realize he was wrong. Thanks for writing :D


She (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Dec 2015

Oh my goodness! I have never been so mad at a story before! It's a good thing! I feel Kagome's pain and I really want to hurt Sesshomaru. You are doing a beautiful job writing this story!! Keep up the good work.


DevaG (Chapter 30) - Fri 27 Nov 2015

I've made it!!... It took me a while to get into the story because of the beginning chapters. I had to look at Sesshomaru in a whole new light, from other stories written about him from other writers. But I'm glad I faught the feeling to stop reading, Im loving the story and how it is and I appreciate the story as a WHOLE. The beginning was neceassary for where the story is today. So I wait humbly for you to update again!! I thank you for your POV in this story!


marisel (Chapter 30) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

When are you going to update again.  It's been a while. I doubt that kags will forgive him.  Would you???  Cann she escape???  Questions and questions ummm


aiko (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

omg....that update made my day, thank you ...... love, maple86/aiko


Catherine Dawson (Chapter 30) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Oh I was so excited when I saw you updated!
I have a serious hate on for Kikyo.
That level of selfishness and wilful ignorance is almost unbelievable. 


Margie (Chapter 30) - Wed 28 Oct 2015

Omg! I'm so happy you posted a new chapter! Wonderful!


Lauren (Chapter 30) - Wed 28 Oct 2015

So glad to see an update from you! And what a great update it was. Poor Kagome is a target on all sides and is holding onto false hope. Evening she manages to get out of that shiro, she'll be trapped and easy prey for Kikyo and Kagura. Her best bet is to form an alliance with Kagura to bide some time and/or get that collar off. *le sigh* This is so upsetting. Stupid Sesshoumaru. If anything, I wanted her to maybe have a chance to be with Kenji. Ugh...

 

Well, I hope you're doing all right. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

 

Happy holidays!

~ Animefreak242

aka

Kawaii Girl


Sess Koibito (Chapter 30) - Mon 26 Oct 2015

Welcome back! You've been so missed! I am so excited to read your new chapters! The development of this story has always had me on the edge of my seat... wondering just how everything would play out for our favorite couple! I may go back and read it from the beginning again! Haha!  :)


A Secret Best Kept (Chapter 30) - Sat 24 Oct 2015

I can not wait till u update again. I love this story!!!!!!


merrrcurius (Chapter 30) - Thu 22 Oct 2015

I've been following your story for a long time. I always get so excited seeing a new chapter from you. I almost chunked my laptop across the room I jumped up with so much excitement lol. I like the way you've built their characters. It always makes me wonder how you're going to have Kagome forgive. IF she ever does. And for Sesshoumaru to realize how grievious his transgressions are against her from her point of view. Maybe when he finally reaches the era she was born in will he understand the way she grew up. And will Kagome accept that this is the way he grew up as well? I imagine it will take a long time. Hopefully Sango and Miroku can make time for her. I wonder if you will convert Kenji to Kagome's way of thinking also. He seems to be the most sympathetic towards her situation. Hopefully she'll teach these Ladies of the court a thing or two.


j (Chapter 30) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

I was so excited when I seen the update notification email. As always a excellent read looking foward to your next update 


Ashlee (Chapter 30) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

When I saw the email updates for this, I could have cried. I actually thought I was dreaming! I love this story so much. You are a master at writing this conplicated, angsty stories, but that have so much hope too. I will wait around as long as it takes for these stories to be finished (the breeder and Choices). I just love them so much! 


marisel (Chapter 30) - Tue 20 Oct 2015

I was surprised when I saw a new chapter posted by you after all these years.  A good surprise and as usual you excellent in your writing.  Hope we don't have to wait another year to see another post.  Thank you for not abandoning your followers.


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