Reviews for The Breeder by Texanlady

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LordMaru (Chapter 28) - Wed 15 Aug 2012

>.< I wonder if Kagome is ever going to feel some kind of affection towards Sesshomaru. I hope so. I really do. >w<


randomfan17 (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

I am so happy you updated this. I like this story and look forward to everything else in the future.


Phyllis (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

I was so exited when I saw you had updated!!  Great chapter!  I hope Sesshy and Kagome are able to make a connection soon.  I want to see them love one another.  The build up is excellent.  I love how he is trying, but I don't blame Kagome for having a hardened heart.  Can't wait to see what happenes!  Thanks again for the update!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

Keep it coming.


aiko (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

hoho... update *happy dance make*... i guess kagura never really had a chance, right?...  and i'm really intrested if Bokensu can help inu, i know he was an idiot, but i feel sorry for him.

thank you!!!!

love, aiko


zandria (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

I soooooooooo love this story everyday I check online to see if a new chapter is added to this story I was so happy when I saw there was a update yesterday I so can’t wait for the next update please update soon you’re the best author ever :).


TruGemini (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

The ever selfish Kikyo and the foolish Inuyasha. Surely when they visit the Tree demon they will understand their plight. Sess still hasn't figured out that for a long time, Kagome will not trust him nor will she warm up to him. He's going to have to settle for seeing her true smiles by watching her with their pups until she finally softens her heart towards him. Thank you for updating!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

Ooooooh! Looks like Kagura and Kikyo are beginning to show their true colors. I can't wait to see the look on her face when she learns that she can NEVER have children. She's not even supposed to be alive. Can we see Kikyo planning to wreak vengeance on Sesshomaru for his part in all this? Want more.


roo86 (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

What can I say life could not be better. Coffee, rainy morning and a new chapter of "The Breeder." I truly love this story and am so happy you have updated it more. There is nothing like it out there. I can see the cracks in Sesshourmaru's armor.  Now he will understand what it means to want to possess (love) and not be able to. 

I just love your depiction of Aisoku and the love Kagome feels for him. 

There are so many stories within the story occuring, can't wait to see how everything plays out.

You Rock!


DamningTheHeavens (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

Mmmm, another tasty update. This site is truly a savor to my tired soul. I work constantly and when I can sit to devour a great fanfic it's beyond expression. The style you write in is descriptive enough to see and believe in. You do an excellent job with the characters. Kagome being the best one. I'm glad you're not rolling immediately into their relationship. You're creating magic In a timely matter and I can't wait to see it form. 

 


Diane Peter (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

Was really happy to see an update, can hardly wait for the next 1. Just as an FYI the tree demon's name is Bokuseno not Bokensu.


Sess Koibito (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

It always brightens my day to look on Dokuga and see that The Breeder has a new chapter!!! Excellent story that I can't get enough of! I wonder what Bokuseno will tell Inuyasha? Will he tell them of the conversation he had with Seshoumaru before Seshoumaru made the deal with Kikyou and took Kagome? That Sesshoumaru knew all along that Kikyou would never be able to have children?

I hope that Kagome can find a way to escape back to her time with her kids, but that seems unlikely. I can't wait to read if there will be an assassination attempt on Aisoku or Kagome, and what Kagura has been scheming! Update again soon!


Renee Mannings (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

So glad you updated!!!

I can't help feeling that Sesshoumaru does not deserve Kagome. I truly hope that they don't end up together in this. He is dispicable.

 


Renee Mannings (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

So glad you updated!!!

I can't help feeling that Sesshoumaru does not deserve Kagome. I truly hope that they don't end up together in this. He is dispicable.

 


Purr-the-inu (Chapter 28) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

oooooooooooooooh thank you thank you thank you i cant wait for more i my goodness it was almost painful when i came to the end ohhh bravo well done on on core!!!!


Rosa (Chapter 27) - Sun 12 Aug 2012

Awesome story, I just LOVE IT!! From the well thought storyline to the incharacter personages and believeble events. The only downside I was able to discover was the slow updates =( But untimately that only made me yearn for them all the more. A pearl.


DamningTheHeavens (Chapter 27) - Sat 11 Aug 2012

I...am in awe. This story is truly unique all on its own. Despite the fact you got the idea from another story, I have never felt the way that I have while reading this. I admit, I'm into some pretty kinky shit, but here it's like a twist of morals and fantasy. What you've done is brought pure logic of both the futuristic world and clashed it will the past.  Kagome rationalizes with the ideas and respects that we do know. Woman is equal of right and choice. Consent is ailment. Sesshoumaru sees nothing wrong with his act because it is how their kind treats a courtship. It is a true battle of perception and values. When they argue about mating you can see how they logically make points but the other does not understand. It's tragically beautiful!

 

The fact that kagome hasn't given I'm yet is fantastic. Way to keep character. 

 

I especially love the scene with

Kagome explaining herself to the guard. 

 

Please, I am so interested to see how this works. how kagome could ever live a beast and just what is sesshous fate alongwith his son. 

 

Damningtheheavens

 


Dlat (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Aug 2012

Hey, so I'm about to read your story, but I just had to say. Reading the prophecy reminded me of the profecy from Buffy. You know "Into every generation a slayer is born: one girl in all the world, a chosen one. She alone will wield the strength and skill to fight the vampires, demons, and the forces of darkness; to stop the spread of their evil and the swell of their number. She is the Slayer." Did you draw inspiration from that? Or is it completely coincidental?


Shalis (Chapter 27) - Sun 05 Aug 2012

More!!! :D

are you still going to post on dokuga? please do cuz i want to know how your story will end up :D


eemawa (Chapter 27) - Thu 02 Aug 2012

I've always loved this story. Somehow, I always forget my account names and passwords to Dokuga, so I have to go through the trouble of creating new ones, but I always add this story to my watch list as soon as I do :). You progress the story so well and make it almost seem real! It's a real pleasure reading this story. I especially love the plot because it's so different. It's terrible that Kagome is being treated the way she is, but I think Sesshoumaru has come a long way in compromising with her and seeing her opinion's and different lifestyle's in a different light. Now that the baby is born, we'll get to see a whole new side to Sesshoumaru! <3

You're totally right by the way... about FF going to the dogs. It sucks now, because the majority of the stories I read are rated R or MA, but they hardly allow any movement in that category. Half the time they will delete your story anyway, because it's rated R. I'm reading a lot of complaints about random deletions too, since they allow a certain group on the site to clean through all the stories. I've had a few of my own deleted and it had no foul launguage or sexual scenes since I don't write those kind of stories very well. Why do you not like FF anymore?

Great Chapter! Can't wait to read more :)


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