Quite an interesting change of status for the 2 of them but quite enjoyable to read. Kinda reminds me of an episode of Samurai Champloo where Jin falls for a woman in the brothel but Sess is so much sexier.

This could be more than a one-shot. I could be chapter one... I'd love to read more.

Great story Smittee! I love it!

Oooh nice and steamy smittee ^.^ There's more right? If not there should be! :3

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SMITTEE IS EBAL!!!!! I must read more!!!!! post more!!! *looks like a starving woman* (Hiten calms her down quickly) *coughs* anyways, really good story Smittee. I really liked it and it had a lot of good stuff in it. Truth be told, I dont read a lot of fics that have this kind of stuff in it, but I couldn't help but to read it to see whatcha got. I really loved it and I hope that you continue on with this story. -kaistern

raRr! smitteekins! r0o likes this a lot! *wonders if it'll be put into my gm challenge :3 *pounces you* raRr! 8steals rock randomly* mine!

Smittee, you did a wonderful job your writing flows well and the description was simple and made it very easy to get a naughty picture. I cant wait for your next piece.