I love the idea of your fanfiction. really. the beginning was also good.
but the last chapters a bit weaker : maybe you wrote them too fast ?
however, I still hope Kagome and Sesshoumaru will continue to travel around the world and time !
dayna (Chapter 23) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
Wow this is a story like no other. I LOVE it!!!!! This Calix character seems very interesting, I cant wait to see what he has cooked up in that little head of his. Anyway I am guessing that they are in Egypt now which should become a very interesting adventure for Kagome and Sessy. Cant wait to see whats gonna happen next.
dayna (Chapter 6) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
So far I LOVE what I have read. I can honestly say that I have laughed from chapters 1-6. This story is soooo funny and I cant wait to see what the Gods have planned for Kagome and Sessy. On to read more.
Hey! This is awesome! I love it. Though you should fix the dialogues and separate them from the paragraphs of narration, I think it's pretty nice. :D I loved it all and the pace of how their relationship was going is really suitable for the events in the story. (You should know that I read all 23 chapters in one night lol). Update soon !!!! n_n
xoxo
Yay! new chapter! I almost forgot about this story, actually I had to go back a couple of chapters to remind myself. I still love it though :)
Scherherazade (Chapter 23) - Wed 03 Feb 2010
I've just read your entire story in one sitting. Wow... awesome.... loved it. I really enjoyed how as the story developed we learned that both Kagome and Sesshoumaru had feelings for each other even before the defeat of Naruku, but tried to hide it or deny it.
Sorry about your computer. Can't wait for an update.
Nelita (Chapter 23) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
I found this story and quite frankly I am glad.This is by far one of the few interesting ones I have found.I do hope you update soon.
REDWOLF (Chapter 23) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
Alright Sesshoumaru, now kick some a$$! Save Kagome! Great chapter!
Thanks for telling me you updated! ;) Poor Kagome getting captured like that! Thanks for the update!
jojo661538 (Chapter 22) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
a great story keep up the great work ^_^
ghost_youkai (Chapter 22) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Oh my, I've never been this figetty in all my life. From the very beginning I was captured, but oddly you have hooked. I can't wait read the rest of this story, keep up the wonderful work ^_^
WOW. That I was really good. XD
I love your writing style! Ah that chapter was splendid! Please keep up the fantastic work! Until the next chapter XD
*shakes head at self* how could i not notice that you had updated? maybe i'm just dense... anyhow i still love this and i'm happy! thanks for the read, i look forward to more!
stars (Chapter 21) - Sun 18 Oct 2009
please updata and good luck on the move
So, I guess we're all wondering the same thing, ne? No one has ever said that a mating mark has to be on the neck. If you even believe in a mating mark at all because I believe it was fandom that dictated that theory,so the option of where is or if is techniquely yours. What a bummer Sesshoumaru had to 'miss' their first time. His baser self is a greedy thing isn't he? Guess he wanted to make sure Sesshoumaru wouldn't back out. (no pun meant) I'll say prayers for your safe journey and new move. Until the next update. JEN
autumngold (Chapter 21) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
Thank you so much for the update! I'm so glad that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are getting along so well! What are they going to have to face next? Of course, in a perfect world, they could just stay where they are now and produce a lot of little Sesshoumaru's! Can't wait for more, but I'll be patient because you're moving. Thank your husband for me for serving in the military. Bless you!
Ameire (Chapter 21) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
This last chapter was great! Short, but good nonetheless! If he's never suffered memory loss from having his instinctual side take over, then did the wine or gods have anything to do with it? To keep him from remembering biting her hip? I guess I'll ave to see in the next chapter, I'm pretty sure you aren't going to volunteer any information.
stars (Chapter 20) - Fri 09 Oct 2009
please updata
wynter89 (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
Oh my goodness!!! Sesshoumaru is one hot Youkai!!!! Kagome is so lucky!!! (at least at the moment she is!)
I liked how Sesshoumaru slowly changed and His relationship with Kagome didn't just happen. Sure he was obessed with her for a few years, He still held himself back and still thought of her as inferior...
I cant wait for whats to come... no pun intended....
I wonder where they will end up next?
This story almost remindes me of 'Kagome: where are you' and 'Seven Feudal Fairy Tales' I am not saying your taking their ideas... I'm not!!! It just shares simialar aspects.
I think you did a lovely job!!! keep up the great work
Good luck!
Kanna37 (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
I have to say I'm surprised. I hadn't read this one before, not sure if I'd care for it, but I've enjoyed it completely! Can't wait to see where they go next on their treasure hunt.
Amber
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