This story is freakin' amazing! A second chapter for this story, one that has a lot of potential may I say, would be very much appreciated! Anyways I enjoyed this lovely story, a whole lot.  
      
*squeals* LOVE IT!!! 
      
map (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Sep 2009 
| Interesting rewrite.
       
| I enjoyed this.  It's a one-shot, right?  It stands alone just fine, but it would be awesome if you made it the first chapter of something longer...
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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