Kai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg... awwwwwwww!! That was so sweet AND sad!! she disappered through the tree...>.> oh well, she had it easy.. But i wuvs dis story but now it's done... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! wait- *thinks for a minute* im ganna go bother you about you other stories >:3
The rock thing was fine! There's no way Kagome is actually going to win a PHYSICAL FIGHT with Naraku. The only way she could would be by purifying him. She always did have a lot of purifying power, and nobody ever really gave her much credit when she did use it. And if she was going to succeed, it would have to be quick. I can see some big arrogant guy scoffing at a girl with a rock, saying "You're going to kill me with a freakin' rock. Go ahead." Remember David and Goliath. So really, the way you did it is the only way I can really see it happening.
stars (Chapter 14) - Tue 11 Aug 2009
please updata
pinkslytherin (Chapter 13) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
i cant wait to see what will happen next!!!
*epic gasp* Oh no! I hope Sesshy saves her in time. Update soon plz.
Frustrated (Chapter 12) - Sun 02 Aug 2009
For the love of the gods, it's "since" not 'sense". This is my first time reading this story and I keep seeing you write "sense" instead of "since" when it's applicable. I.e the first sentence of the new chapter. "It had been day’s sense they went and looked for Naraku". It should be "It had been day’s sincethey went and looked for Naraku. "Jaken began to keep quiet sincehe got glares every time.
Sorry I don't mean to come off b*tchy or anything. I just hate when people are not using proper grammar. Your story is good, actually it's very good. I like the plot, but this distraction is too much.
Miss.Undo (Chapter 11) - Wed 29 Jul 2009
great chapter only one question.. um where will she go when there all done? back to her time or stay in his time? well hope you got another chapterplaned out. update soon!")
faby (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Jul 2009
your, het. is better alright.please, I've read other's "mateing" part now those suck. (note: 3 years go I read the some suckie ones)
stars (Chapter 10) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
please updata
Wow this story's really good :D
Keep up the good work! ^^ I can't wait for the next upcoming chapters :]
Miss.Undo (Chapter 9) - Fri 24 Jul 2009
Wonderful work. please update as soon as you can. i hope theres is a lemon next chapter!they need one lol. ")
Oh Man I keep forgetting the security question and lose my review. Okay again, I'm loving your story don't worry about a Lemon it will come when it comes. Your characters are moving at a great pace, Sess needed to realize what he has and fully accept his situation so that he can move on. I don't think he could have not knowing what happened to his little girl. Excellent chapter and awesome story. The Pace is perfect the Lemon will come when it is right, don't rush it just to get a lemon. I respect the writer and the story and I don't demand the writer change or hurry their work to suite me. I love the fact that there are other demons alive. Will we find out more about what happened to Inuyasha and Shippo, the others? Excellent chapter, Awesome story. I constantly check for updates your story has become amoung my favs. Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
loveless (Chapter 9) - Thu 23 Jul 2009
Great chapter. I hope that Sesshomaru and Kagome will eventually get back to the past. Please update soon.
Miss.Undo (Chapter 8) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
i love it, i think you should continue to update. please update as soon as you can. your doinf an awsome job ")
stars (Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
please updata soon
I sent a review without words because I forgot to answer the security question! I feel like an idiot. Okay, excellent fic I love it!!!!!!! This is so different from other fan fiction that I have ever read and I have read a lot of fan fiction. I'm loving it. I love the pace of their realtionship and their situation. Is Sess going to tell Kagome how he feels awful about not being able to be himself and how his beast needs to be let out to run wild, maybe she can find a place for him to do that. I can't wait till the next chapter to see if Kagome remembers what she said while she was drunk? Will they find a way back? Will they meet other demons, did Inuyasha survive? Did Koga? I can't wait for more I feel for Kagome and Sess. You wrote this very well, it's excellent! I have no complaints except I want more right away. I dont' read stories for grammar or spelling I read for enjoyment and content and I am enjoying the content and the story. Your story is unique and refreshing and now amoung one of my favs! I want more!! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Aww, that was sweet. Sess carried her to her birthday party, and took care of her when she was drunk. She should have a bad hangover in the morning...
RENEE (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
Loving the first chapter I wonder when Kouga will learn the Amye is the one for him..Poor Kagome I can't wait for more.
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