Yay You updated!!! I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru does with the fool who
s trying to gain entry. *sigh* talk about stupid. But..uh...how did the fake Inuyash get in? I meant the compound in the first place? *sighs* well, okay, I guess you probably won't tell me that, stupid question. Shutting up now. And waiting. But more importantly, shutting up.
Thanks for updating~
Bing! Bang! Boom! That was one lalapolooza of a chapter! The sex scene between Kagome and Shun was smokin' hot. InuYasha watching, raised my hackles. Then, the figure trying the locks on the windows from outside. That part where it started out as InuYasha, and then the dawning realization that it is InuYasha's human night. Then, the imagery of Kouga, jumping on the running board, and then on top of the truck, and howling to his wolves! Yowza! Sesshomaru rips open the door of the truck! Holy c***, you knocked my socks off.
That was the most amazing chapter in my personal history of fan fiction. Bar none.
Fairqueen (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
i love this story. and 2 up-dates in 2 days i think i am beening spoiled. but i think i will be greedy too. MORE MORE MORE :) and u r keeping Sess and Inuyasha in char. which is nice and your totally new char. is just wonderful. ty :)
TruGemini (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
Oooohhhh! I can't wait to find out who the intruder is! What could he or she be possibly looking for? This is sooo cool! Thanks for updating so soon Tenchi! This is still one of my favorites!
Jupe (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
And that title is obviously Menage au Inu. x3 ! So glad to see you continuing this - but now I'm all in a tizzy from the suspense! You gotta stop writing cliffhangers, hun. ):
Wow, I loved the altercation between Kagome, Shun, and InuYasha. You manage to distill so much character into so few words, it is an amazing writing skill. I was wondering about InuYasha, and I can tell you are going to let us in on his gig, bit by bit... Can't wait for more!
Oh come on Tenchi! A Cliffy?? I thought we were passed this already! LOL! I was so ready to see what was going to happen next...darn it to heck! Now I have to wait!
Shun is low and slow, he will make up for any lack Kagome may feel from Sesshy's straight on style... Hopefully he doesn't steal her heart completely from our dog god...
You have managed to create one of the few original characters I have ever really liked. He's one of the BIG boys, I can see why Kagome wants to play with him. I don't think InuYasha stands a chance...
Naughty Kagome! It must be all the pheromones floating around in the air, from being surrounded by all those awesome males. Yowza.
I can't find all those titles for the life of me, but the ones I did find gave me a chuckle...
This was such a beautiful chapter! The harsh love of Sess and the gentleness of Shun is just what she needs. I love it!
All those hot guys, and a snow leopard demon as well. Wonder what Kagome's addiction is....
Wow, that first chapter was like the Chippendale Dancers. Jakotsu, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Miroku, and Kouga, dressed in leather pants, OMG. All that eye candy, and decadent food, as well.
Ameire (Chapter 6) - Thu 12 Nov 2009
This is amazing! I love this fanfic! Do you have any pictures of shun? I have a nice mental image, but I just wanna parr it up with an actual image, like I can For Sesshoumaru...not to say his appearence doesn't change a bit with each fanfic *grins* . I have to hand it to you- a snow leopard sounds pretty damn sey. Same for his markings-very well done. Take it from a self-proclaimed Miroku Grade pervert. This fic is damn good :3
It almost seems like Sess wants this more than anyone else. Is it possible? Why Shun?
The anticipation is building. I love the foreplay!
Hahahahaha! So wrapped in an orgasm she forgot her neighbor. Lovely.
I love this so far. It seems so random and the challenged attached to it is so unique.
So this is where Shun comes in. I can't wait to see who is after who and why! Don't make us wait too long!
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