I have not read the lemon part yet, but this was a really lovely story. The information about the Oiran and the Tayuu was very interesting. From the inside, it does seem like a miserable and tragic existence while those on the outside might see it as extravagant and glamorous. It was really thought provoking.
The writing was exquisite, and while I thought Sesshoumaru's portrayal was a bit softer than what I am accustomed to, I felt it was fitting for this particular story. Overall, very nicely done! I'll get to the lemon part eventually, but I need to be working on my own stuffs. XD You'll know when I finally read it though, I'll drop you a line or two.
TTFN!
~Sianna
:droooooooools: Uhm. MT, you've killed me. Just saying. Ohh, but I loved how you alternated between the two passions - it really keeps you involved! (If you aren't already in this wonderful short story!) Love it!
Woooow, I can sooo not wait to read the next part of this! I couldn't tear my eyes away from the smuttyness on the screen. How erotic! I especially love how you keep going back and forth between future and past like you did within the story. It makes it all the better--especially since the future Kagome and Sesshomaru are seeing flashes of their past selves. Love it love it love it! Can't wait for more <3
Well, my my, that was intensely erotic. The echoes of the past, carry forward to the future, which now bodes well for them to be together. So sweet, and it left me with a feeling of hope and optimism, for a happier life in this present time...
Ah, this story is so beautiful and melancholy, but filled with hope. And now I see you have written more, so on to the next... What a lovely treat!
I'm really enjoying this. The conversation they had all those centuries back was very deep. Poor Kagome. I thought it very touching that he joined her on her journey as well and promised to find her in their next lives. That was sweet of someone who you barely know. Very touching indeed. And OMG wow that last chapter! BOY WAS SHE DARING! I can't wait to see the next part of this. And if I knew how to draw I would so make a fanart for you of the scene where he was touching and playing with her while she play the instument. I kept seeing that mental image in my head and even I had to blush. Alas I can't draw, but that seemed to be a very intimate scene!
MY GODS! You MUST continue that soon! My heart was pounding as I read it!
The first 3-chapter part was amazingly romantic while this one is amazingly erotic. It may be smut, but at leat it is a poetic and well written one!
Keep going: I really want to see the destiny of the quail egg! :P
So is the present day Sesshoumaru the same as the past Lord Sesshoumaru? Is he still a demon in the present? Can you clarify that for me? Keep up the amazing work and update soon :P
I just finished reading this story a couple of days ago. You went into the story on a solem note, my goodness who ever made a suicide seem so hopefull and promising, you've certainly have done it. I like how in the end after they witnessed themselves in the past that they didn't automatically remember each other, they just were placed with information to give them a nudge in their relationship. I really enjoyed it.
That was a beautiful story. Is the present Sesshou still a demon lord? And will u consider doing a sequel? Keep up the good work :P
That was a wonderful end to an excellent story! I enjoyed it very much.
That was beautiful... I am glad that they found each other again. Wonderful!
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